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              【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【多】【想】【告】【诉】【您】【,】【我】【对】【您】【的】【感】【激】【;】【多】【想】【告】【诉】【您】【,】【您】【给】【我】【的】【感】【动】【;】【多】【想】【告】【诉】【您】【,】【我】【想】【喊】【您】【一】【声】【“】【父】【亲】【”】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【阿】【嚏】【!】【董】【蕊】【,】【赶】【紧】【给】【我】【点】【纸】【…】【…】【”】【我】【小】【声】【对】【同】【桌】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【这】【一】【天】【你】【都】【快】【吞】【噬】【我】【一】【卷】【纸】【了】【!】【”】【董】【蕊】【瞪】【了】【我】【一】【眼】【,】【把】【纸】【递】【给】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【在】【讲】【课】【的】【语】【文】【老】【师】【走】【下】【讲】【台】【,】【来】【到】【我】【身】【边】【,】【看】【到】【我】【椅】【子】【上】【垃】【圾】【袋】【里】【那】【片】【“】【纸】【的】【海】【洋】【”】【,】【不】【禁】【感】【叹】【道】【:】【“】【你】【的】【鼻】【子】【该】【治】【一】【治】【了】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【老】【师】【,】【这】【一】【天】【都】【这】【样】【,】【鼻】【子】【都】【擦】【破】【了】【,】【我】【也】【无】【奈】【啊】【!】【”】【我】【可】【怜】【兮】【兮】【地】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【一】【会】【儿】【下】【课】【,】【你】【到】【我】【办】【公】【室】【来】【一】【趟】【。】【”】【语】【文】【老】【师】【说】【完】【,】【转】【身】【回】【到】【讲】【台】【上】【继】【续】【板】【书】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【下】【课】【铃】【响】【了】【。】【我】【跟】【着】【语】【文】【老】【师】【来】【到】【办】【公】【室】【。】【老】【师】【说】【:】【“】【珞】【锜】【,】【你】【把】【几】【个】【椅】【子】【连】【摆】【在】【一】【起】【。】【”】【“】【哦】【”】【,】【我】【把】【四】【把】【椅】【子】【接】【连】【摆】【成】【一】【趟】【。】【这】【时】【,】【语】【文】【老】【师】【把】【饮】【水】【机】【里】【的】【水】【加】【热】【,】【又】【像】【变】【魔】【术】【似】【的】【拿】【出】【一】【个】【新】【口】【罩】【。】【我】【疑】【惑】【了】【:】【“】【老】【师】【,】【您】【这】【是】【要】【干】【什】【么】【?】【”】【“】【干】【什】【么】【?】【你】【的】【鼻】【子】【不】【是】【总】【流】【鼻】【涕】【吗】【?】【我】【给】【你】【治】【治】【。】【”】【我】【傻】【了】【,】【我】【的】【天】【啊】【!】【语】【文】【老】【师】【要】【给】【我】【热】【敷】【?】【这】【时】【,】【语】【文】【老】【师】【又】【下】【令】【了】【:】【“】【来】【,】【躺】【在】【椅】【子】【上】【。】【”】【“】【老】【师】【,】【不】【用】【麻】【烦】【您】【了】【!】【我】【的】【鼻】【子】【向】【来】【就】【这】【样】【,】【我】【都】【习】【惯】【了】【!】【”】【说】【着】【,】【我】【一】【步】【步】【向】【后】【退】【。】【“】【让】【你】【躺】【你】【就】【躺】【,】【臭】【小】【子】【!】【”】【我】【赶】【忙】【躺】【了】【上】【去】【,】【只】【见】【语】【文】【老】【师】【拿】【着】【口】【罩】【放】【入】【热】【水】【中】【,】【浸】【了】【好】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【然】【后】【把】【口】【罩】【拿】【出】【来】【轻】【轻】【拧】【了】【一】【下】【,】【走】【过】【来】【,】【把】【口】【罩】【慢】【慢】【敷】【在】【我】【的】【鼻】【子】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【口】【罩】【暖】【暖】【地】【敷】【在】【我】【的】【鼻】【子】【上】【,】【我】【感】【觉】【鼻】【子】【里】【涌】【上】【了】【一】【股】【热】【气】【,】【舒】【服】【极】【了】【。】【“】【怎】【么】【样】【,】【臭】【小】【子】【!】【”】【我】【心】【里】【说】【:】【“】【老】【师】【啊】【!】【我】【太】【感】【动】【了】【,】【我】【怎】【么】【能】【受】【到】【您】【这】【样】【的】【厚】【待】【啊】【!】【”】【我】【说】【不】【出】【话】【,】【眼】【泪】【在】【眼】【圈】【里】【打】【转】【,】【我】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【,】【不】【想】【让】【眼】【泪】【破】【坏】【我】【男】【子】【汉】【的】【形】【象】【,】【可】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【却】【隐】【约】【浮】【现】【出】【三】【年】【来】【与】【老】【师】【相】【处】【的】【点】【点】【滴】【滴】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【二】【时】【,】【我】【是】【班】【里】【的】【“】【接】【茬】【”】【大】【王】【。】【您】【每】【每】【在】【讲】【台】【上】【兴】【致】【勃】【勃】【地】【讲】【得】【入】【神】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【总】【会】【充】【当】【“】【程】【咬】【金】【”】【,】【把】【您】【讲】【课】【的】【思】【路】【打】【断】【。】【您】【从】【没】【在】【课】【堂】【上】【批】【评】【我】【,】【而】【是】【在】【课】【后】【不】【厌】【其】【烦】【地】【为】【我】【讲】【解】【,】【教】【育】【我】【,】【直】【至】【帮】【我】【改】【掉】【这】【个】【毛】【病】【。】【每】【当】【看】【到】【我】【成】【绩】【下】【降】【时】【,】【您】【总】【是】【第】【一】【时】【间】【找】【我】【谈】【话】【,】【帮】【我】【分】【析】【考】【砸】【的】【原】【因】【;】【每】【当】【我】【情】【绪】【低】【落】【的】【时】【候】【,】【您】【总】【像】【父】【亲】【一】【样】【循】【循】【善】【诱】【,】【帮】【我】【重】【新】【树】【立】【信】【心】【:】【每】【天】【的】【语】【文】【课】【上】【,】【您】【总】【要】【向】【我】【投】【来】【询】【问】【的】【目】【光】【…】【…】【老】【师】【,】【这】【一】【切】【的】【一】【切】【,】【我】【都】【看】【在】【眼】【里】【记】【在】【心】【中】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【师】【,】【您】【伴】【随】【着】【我】【走】【过】【了】【三】【年】【的】【初】【中】【学】【习】【生】【活】【。】【我】【想】【告】【诉】【您】【,】【我】【从】【您】【身】【上】【学】【到】【了】【许】【多】【,】【既】【有】【知】【识】【,】【还】【有】【做】【人】【的】【道】【理】【。】【我】【知】【道】【,】【我】【应】【该】【交】【给】【您】【一】【张】【满】【意】【的】【答】【卷】【了】【!】【我】【想】【告】【诉】【您】【,】【老】【师】【,】【您】【就】【是】【我】【的】【父】【亲】【!】【谢】【谢】【您】【,】【我】【的】【老】【师】【!】【我】【爱】【您】【,】【我】【的】【父】【亲】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【成】【功】【地】【塑】【造】【了】【一】【位】【优】【秀】【的】【老】【师】【形】【象】【。】【“】【我】【”】【生】【病】【后】【,】【语】【文】【老】【师】【热】【心】【地】【帮】【我】【热】【敷】【,】【这】【看】【似】【平】【常】【的】【小】【事】【,】【却】【让】【“】【我】【”】【深】【深】【感】【动】【,】【在】【泪】【眼】【模】【糊】【中】【回】【忆】【起】【和】【老】【师】【相】【处】【的】【初】【中】【生】【活】【,】【表】【达】【了】【对】【老】【师】【的】【真】【挚】【情】【感】【。】【作】【者】【善】【于】【运】【用】【语】【言】【描】【写】【来】【突】【出】【人】【物】【性】【格】【,】【行】【文】【中】【巧】【妙】【改】【换】【人】【称】【,】【使】【感】【情】【的】【抒】【发】【真】【切】【自】【然】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【穆】【梓】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

              【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【校】【是】【我】【们】【学】【习】【知】【识】【的】【乐】【园】【,】【班】【级】【是】【我】【们】【创】【造】【乐】【趣】【的】【园】【地】【。】【而】【我】【们】【的】【班】【级】【,】【不】【正】【是】【我】【们】【自】【己】【的】【家】【园】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【个】【星】【期】【五】【,】【便】【是】【我】【“】【当】【家】【”】【的】【日】【子】【,】【因】【为】【我】【是】【我】【们】【七】【年】【(】【6】【)】【班】【星】【期】【五】【的】【值】【日】【班】【长】【。】【大】【家】【请】【随】【着】【我】【的】【脚】【步】【,】【一】【起】【来】【看】【一】【看】【属】【于】【我】【们】【七】【年】【(】【6】【)】【班】【的】【星】【期】【五】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【早】【自】【修】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【陆】【陆】【续】【续】【来】【到】【了】【学】【校】【,】【纷】【纷】【拿】【出】【英】【语】【书】【读】【了】【起】【来】【,】【而】【身】【为】【值】【日】【班】【长】【的】【我】【便】【站】【起】【来】【管】【理】【纪】【律】【。】【琅】【琅】【的】【读】【书】【声】【不】【断】【地】【从】【门】【窗】【飞】【出】【,】【也】【给】【从】【门】【前】【走】【过】【的】【同】【学】【与】【老】【师】【留】【下】【了】【一】【个】【好】【心】【情】【。】【“】【邵】【镇】【宇】【!】【”】【我】【生】【气】【地】【喊】【他】【的】【名】【字】【,】【他】【又】【在】【和】【同】【桌】【徐】【江】【鹏】【聊】【天】【了】【。】【“】【干】【吗】【呀】【”】【邵】【镇】【宇】【漫】【不】【经】【心】【地】【说】【着】【。】【我】【恶】【狠】【狠】【地】【瞪】【了】【他】【一】【眼】【,】【严】【肃】【地】【对】【他】【说】【:】【“】【你】【信】【不】【信】【让】【你】【站】【起】【来】【读】【啊】【!】【还】【挺】【悠】【闲】【的】【呢】【!】【”】【“】【不】【要】【啊】【,】【大】【姐】【,】【我】【读】【行】【了】【吧】【,】【我】【读】【。】【”】【他】【立】【马】【不】【说】【话】【了】【,】【默】【默】【地】【读】【起】【了】【英】【语】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【课】【间】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【认】【认】【真】【真】【地】【上】【完】【一】【节】【英】【语】【课】【,】【下】【课】【铃】【响】【了】【,】【可】【还】【沉】【浸】【在】【精】【彩】【的】【课】【堂】【内】【容】【上】【呢】【,】【而】【我】【们】【的】【冯】【大】【纪】【检】【委】【员】【便】【急】【了】【起】【来】【,】【他】【用】【力】【地】【拍】【手】【、】【跺】【脚】【,】【那】【声】【音】【,】【简】【直】【震】【耳】【欲】【聋】【,】【七】【(】【6】【)】【班】【教】【室】【的】【每】【个】【角】【落】【都】【可】【以】【听】【得】【见】【。】【他】【不】【为】【别】【的】【,】【就】【是】【想】【示】【意】【同】【学】【们】【出】【教】【室】【。】【我】【也】【起】【身】【催】【着】【同】【学】【们】【出】【教】【室】【:】【“】【大】【家】【快】【点】【出】【去】【啦】【,】【值】【周】【老】【师】【一】【会】【要】【来】【了】【,】【快】【一】【点】【!】【快】【一】【点】【!】【”】【不】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【便】【人】【走】【楼】【空】【,】【教】【室】【里】【一】【个】【人】【都】【没】【有】【了】【,】【冯】【大】【纪】【检】【委】【员】【看】【到】【这】【一】【切】【,】【满】【意】【地】【笑】【了】【。】【同】【学】【们】【都】【在】【室】【外】【,】【有】【的】【看】【风】【景】【,】【有】【的】【聊】【天】【,】【享】【受】【着】【属】【于】【我】【们】【课】【间】【十】【分】【钟】【的】【轻】【松】【和】【愉】【快】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【社】【会】【课】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【令】【同】【学】【们】【激】【动】【的】【社】【会】【课】【终】【于】【来】【了】【,】【大】【家】【在】【老】【师】【的】【引】【导】【下】【随】【心】【所】【欲】【地】【畅】【谈】【起】【了】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【竟】【有】【点】【吵】【闹】【,】【向】【噪】【声】【最】【大】【的】【角】【落】【望】【去】【,】【原】【来】【是】【我】【右】【手】【边】【的】【第】【三】【大】【组】【。】【只】【见】【宣】【戴】【金】【面】【红】【耳】【赤】【,】【和】【同】【桌】【赵】【宏】【飞】【争】【执】【不】【停】【,】【还】【时】【不】【时】【地】【给】【前】【后】【桌】【的】【同】【学】【讲】【几】【个】【笑】【话】【。】【看】【到】【这】【种】【情】【景】【,】【我】【出】【马】【了】【:】【“】【安】【静】【!】【宣】【戴】【金】【,】【不】【要】【再】【讲】【话】【了】【,】【专】【心】【听】【老】【师】【讲】【课】【!】【”】【“】【好】【好】【好】【,】【我】【不】【讲】【,】【你】【千】【万】【不】【要】【把】【我】【记】【在】【班】【级】【日】【志】【上】【面】【。】【”】【“】【你】【不】【讲】【我】【就】【不】【记】【,】【再】【讲】【话】【我】【就】【记】【咯】【!】【”】【“】【嗯】【,】【我】【肯】【定】【不】【讲】【了】【。】【”】【宣】【戴】【金】【开】【始】【认】【真】【听】【老】【师】【细】【致】【的】【引】【导】【和】【讲】【解】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【修】【课】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【师】【不】【在】【,】【同】【学】【们】【自】【修】【,】【我】【这】【个】【“】【当】【家】【人】【”】【当】【然】【义】【不】【容】【辞】【,】【由】【我】【来】【管】【理】【好】【班】【级】【。】【我】【轻】【轻】【地】【走】【到】【讲】【台】【上】【,】【开】【始】【了】【自】【己】【的】【自】【修】【,】【没】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【第】【三】【大】【组】【“】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【”】【聊】【成】【一】【片】【,】【“】【嘻】【嘻】【哈】【哈】【”】【笑】【成】【一】【团】【,】【做】【作】【业】【的】【好】【心】【情】【就】【这】【样】【被】【他】【们】【无】【情】【地】【破】【坏】【了】【。】【我】【火】【冒】【三】【丈】【,】【箭】【步】【走】【到】【第】【三】【大】【组】【面】【前】【,】【压】【抑】【着】【怒】【气】【低】【声】【对】【他】【们】【说】【:】【“】【都】【静】【静】【自】【修】【,】【不】【许】【聊】【天】【!】【”】【当】【时】【,】【我】【非】【常】【生】【气】【,】【心】【想】【:】【自】【修】【时】【间】【还】【不】【老】【实】【,】【真】【是】【的】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【当】【家】【的】【日】【子】【就】【这】【样】【眨】【眼】【即】【逝】【了】【,】【说】【长】【不】【长】【,】【说】【短】【不】【短】【,】【但】【比】【起】【我】【们】【的】【班】【主】【任】【,】【连】【皮】【毛】【都】【算】【不】【上】【,】【而】【“】【当】【家】【”】【的】【好】【与】【坏】【,】【说】【也】【说】【不】【完】【,】【虽】【然】【有】【着】【很】【大】【的】【成】【就】【感】【,】【但】【也】【是】【很】【累】【的】【,】【不】【仅】【要】【会】【管】【别】【人】【,】【关】【键】【是】【要】【会】【管】【自】【己】【。】【而】【我】【只】【是】【“】【当】【家】【”】【一】【天】【,】【就】【抱】【怨】【颇】【多】【了】【,】【更】【别】【说】【整】【天】【给】【我】【们】【“】【当】【家】【”】【的】【宋】【老】【师】【和】【金】【老】【师】【了】【…】【…】【其】【实】【真】【的】【要】【感】【谢】【她】【们】【,】【她】【们】【这】【样】【为】【我】【们】【操】【心】【。】【在】【我】【们】【做】【错】【的】【时】【候】【责】【怪】【我】【们】【,】【是】【为】【我】【们】【好】【;】【在】【我】【们】【开】【心】【的】【时】【候】【与】【我】【们】【分】【享】【,】【拉】【近】【了】【彼】【此】【的】【距】【离】【;】【在】【我】【们】【吵】【闹】【的】【时】【候】【扯】【嗓】【子】【,】【是】【希】【望】【我】【们】【能】【够】【静】【下】【心】【来】【学】【习】【。】【她】【们】【为】【我】【们】【付】【出】【的】【太】【多】【太】【多】【,】【而】【我】【们】【总】【是】【觉】【得】【理】【所】【应】【当】【,】【却】【从】【没】【想】【过】【要】【感】【激】【她】【们】【,】【可】【她】【们】【确】【实】【是】【我】【们】【最】【应】【该】【感】【激】【的】【人】【。】【她】【们】【在】【我】【们】【困】【惑】【时】【给】【我】【们】【答】【案】【,】【在】【苦】【恼】【时】【给】【我】【们】【快】【乐】【,】【在】【伤】【心】【时】【给】【我】【们】【自】【信】【,】【在】【失】【败】【时】【给】【我】【们】【勇】【气】【。】【她】【们】【的】【好】【,】【她】【们】【的】【爱】【,】【是】【永】【远】【永】【远】【也】【诉】【说】【不】【完】【的】【。】【她】【们】【对】【我】【们】【的】【无】【限】【关】【怀】【,】【也】【是】【永】【远】【讲】【不】【清】【楚】【的】【,】【因】【为】【,】【只】【有】【我】【的】【心】【才】【体】【会】【得】【到】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唉】【,】【当】【家】【真】【好】【,】【当】【家】【真】【累】【,】【当】【家】【真】【辛】【苦】【!】【老】【师】【们】【,】【感】【谢】【你】【们】【是】【我】【们】【七】【年】【(】【6】【)】【班】【的】【当】【家】【人】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【 】【宋】【春】【仙】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】糖尿病最新治疗【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【文】【字】【是】【优】【雅】【的】【,】【它】【从】【未】【想】【过】【疯】【狂】【,】【它】【在】【窄】【小】【的】【格】【子】【间】【轻】【轻】【地】【旋】【转】【,】【留】【下】【了】【一】【行】【行】【意】【蕴】【深】【长】【的】【语】【句】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【文】【字】【是】【奔】【放】【的】【,】【它】【从】【未】【想】【过】【收】【敛】【,】【它】【在】【宽】【大】【的】【白】【纸】【间】【快】【乐】【地】【驰】【骋】【,】【留】【下】【了】【一】【篇】【篇】【豪】【情】【满】【怀】【的】【文】【章】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【真】【心】【地】【喜】【爱】【文】【字】【。】【水】【瓶】【座】【的】【我】【天】【生】【爱】【幻】【想】【,】【深】【夜】【躺】【在】【床】【上】【总】【会】【在】【脑】【海】【里】【不】【停】【地】【构】【思】【,】【灵】【感】【像】【岩】【浆】【一】【样】【喷】【涌】【,】【像】【小】【溪】【流】【一】【样】【叮】【叮】【咚】【咚】【地】【畅】【流】【,】【我】【的】【文】【字】【花】【儿】【跳】【起】【了】【优】【雅】【的】【芭】【蕾】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【舞】【蹈】【的】【声】【音】【像】【催】【眠】【曲】【一】【样】【,】【沉】【淀】【在】【我】【心】【灵】【的】【某】【个】【角】【落】【。】【早】【上】【起】【来】【,】【昨】【夜】【文】【字】【的】【舞】【蹈】【还】【深】【深】【地】【印】【在】【脑】【海】【,】【我】【从】【脑】【海】【捞】【出】【来】【,】【轻】【轻】【地】【填】【到】【纸】【间】【,】【这】【似】【乎】【已】【经】【成】【了】【我】【的】【乐】【趣】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【是】【,】【我】【多】【想】【在】【漆】【黑】【的】【深】【夜】【爬】【起】【来】【与】【我】【的】【文】【字】【在】【纸】【上】【跳】【舞】【呀】【,】【跳】【过】【宽】【大】【白】【纸】【的】【页】【边】【,】【跳】【过】【厚】【重】【大】【书】【的】【书】【角】【,】【轻】【快】【的】【步】【伐】【在】【一】【页】【又】【一】【页】【的】【白】【纸】【上】【留】【下】【一】【篇】【又】【一】【篇】【咀】【嚼】【不】【尽】【的】【精】【美】【篇】【章】【!】【这】【情】【景】【是】【多】【么】【美】【妙】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【像】【一】【个】【辛】【勤】【的】【园】【丁】【,】【从】【我】【忙】【碌】【的】【学】【习】【生】【活】【中】【挤】【出】【微】【乎】【其】【微】【的】【短】【暂】【时】【间】【来】【浇】【灌】【我】【的】【文】【字】【花】【儿】【。】【它】【们】【在】【我】【的】【脑】【海】【里】【奔】【跑】【,】【按】【捺】【不】【住】【地】【从】【我】【的】【眼】【睛】【里】【、】【耳】【朵】【里】【跳】【到】【纸】【上】【;】【它】【们】【在】【我】【的】【笔】【下】【奔】【跑】【、】【嬉】【戏】【、】【躲】【闪】【着】【,】【沐】【浴】【着】【我】【浇】【下】【的】【甘】【露】【。】【流】【年】【似】【水】【,】【我】【相】【信】【有】【一】【天】【,】【我】【可】【爱】【的】【文】【字】【们】【组】【成】【的】【精】【美】【篇】【章】【,】【将】【给】【我】【的】【读】【者】【带】【来】【片】【刻】【美】【好】【的】【感】【受】【、】【心】【灵】【的】【慰】【藉】【或】【是】【思】【想】【的】【放】【松】【,】【至】【少】【会】【让】【我】【觉】【得】【值】【,】【我】【的】【心】【血】【没】【有】【白】【费】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【!】【我】【的】【文】【字】【是】【自】【由】【的】【,】【它】【们】【随】【心】【所】【欲】【,】【在】【世】【界】【的】【每】【一】【个】【角】【落】【舞】【动】【,】【在】【我】【需】【要】【它】【们】【时】【,】【它】【们】【便】【会】【随】【时】【跳】【到】【我】【的】【笔】【端】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【袁】【江】【玲】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

              【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【中】【学】【语】【文】【课】【程】【标】【准】【》】【要】【求】【学】【生】【树】【立】【“】【大】【语】【文】【观】【”】【,】【既】【要】【熟】【读】【圣】【贤】【书】【,】【又】【要】【关】【心】【天】【下】【大】【事】【、】【熟】【知】【杰】【出】【人】【物】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【从】【名】【人】【的】【高】【尚】【的】【人】【格】【中】【完】【成】【自】【己】【人】【格】【的】【提】【升】【,】【从】【他】【们】【的】【艰】【辛】【创】【业】【、】【博】【大】【胸】【襟】【中】【体】【悟】【人】【生】【的】【真】【谛】【。】【名】【人】【的】【故】【事】【本】【身】【就】【具】【有】【启】【发】【性】【或】【哲】【理】【性】【,】【我】【们】【大】【可】【“】【智】【者】【见】【智】【”】【,】【根】【据】【自】【己】【的】【生】【活】【体】【验】【,】【发】【挥】【独】【特】【的】【构】【思】【,】【展】【现】【浓】【厚】【的】【个】【人】【色】【彩】【,】【显】【示】【独】【到】【的】【生】【活】【见】【解】【和】【认】【识】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【物】【素】【材】【速】【用】【,】【方】【法】【可】【以】【多】【样】【:】【取】【其】【一】【点】【法】【、】【对】【比】【映】【衬】【法】【、】【类】【比】【映】【衬】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【取】【其】【一】【点】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【则】【素】【材】【,】【往】【往】【由】【相】【对】【独】【立】【的】【几】【个】【部】【分】【组】【成】【,】【从】【而】【具】【有】【多】【重】【意】【义】【。】【遇】【到】【这】【种】【素】【材】【,】【行】【文】【时】【可】【以】【根】【据】【文】【章】【中】【心】【的】【需】【要】【,】【选】【取】【素】【材】【的】【一】【部】【分】【或】【一】【个】【细】【节】【入】【文】【,】【从】【某】【一】【角】【度】【阐】【释】【,】【但】【这】【一】【角】【度】【要】【与】【文】【章】【的】【整】【体】【观】【点】【一】【致】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【看】【下】【面】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【拜】【访】【贝】【多】【芬】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【云】【南】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【要】【扼】【住】【命】【运】【的】【咽】【喉】【。】【”】【刚】【听】【到】【这】【句】【话】【,】【心】【底】【不】【禁】【为】【之】【一】【颤】【。】【想】【象】【一】【位】【双】【耳】【失】【聪】【的】【苦】【难】【音】【乐】【家】【是】【怎】【样】【以】【常】【人】【难】【以】【想】【象】【的】【毅】【力】【为】【世】【人】【谱】【写】【了】【不】【朽】【音】【符】【。】【昨】【天】【上】【帝】【在】【宫】【廷】【举】【行】【了】【一】【次】【抽】【奖】【仪】【式】【。】【很】【幸】【运】【的】【是】【我】【得】【了】【天】【使】【奖】【,】【上】【帝】【奖】【励】【我】【去】【了】【一】【趟】【人】【间】【。】【于】【是】【我】【决】【定】【去】【德】【国】【拜】【访】【贝】【多】【芬】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【“】【请】【问】【,】【这】【里】【是】【德】【国】【吗】【?】【”】【“】【这】【里】【当】【然】【是】【德】【国】【,】【可】【似】【乎】【已】【经】【不】【像】【一】【个】【国】【家】【了】【。】【”】【这】【个】【人】【说】【话】【好】【像】【很】【刻】【薄】【。】【“】【那】【么】【请】【问】【这】【里】【有】【一】【个】【叫】【贝】【多】【芬】【的】【人】【吗】【?】【”】【钢】【琴】【声】【突】【然】【停】【止】【了】【。】【“】【我】【就】【是】【贝】【多】【芬】【。】【”】【真】【的】【没】【有】【想】【到】【,】【他】【竟】【然】【就】【是】【贝】【多】【芬】【,】【我】【刚】【要】【开】【口】【,】【“】【你】【深】【更】【半】【夜】【找】【我】【有】【什】【么】【事】【?】【”】【“】【我】【挺】【崇】【拜】【你】【的】【,】【所】【以】【来】【拜】【访】【拜】【访】【。】【”】【“】【不】【要】【这】【样】【,】【我】【最】【讨】【厌】【别】【人】【这】【样】【,】【有】【话】【快】【说】【!】【”】【说】【真】【的】【,】【我】【真】【的】【挺】【生】【气】【的】【,】【人】【家】【好】【好】【地】【来】【拜】【访】【你】【,】【你】【怎】【么】【可】【以】【这】【样】【对】【待】【别】【人】【。】【于】【是】【我】【想】【了】【想】【,】【决】【定】【讥】【讽】【一】【下】【他】【。】【“】【你】【现】【在】【这】【样】【有】【名】【气】【,】【你】【可】【以】【向】【我】【说】【说】【你】【小】【时】【候】【的】【生】【活】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【暗】【自】【得】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【4】【岁】【开】【始】【学】【习】【音】【乐】【,】【1】【2】【岁】【已】【能】【自】【如】【地】【演】【奏】【,】【1】【7】【岁】【赴】【欧】【洲】【音】【乐】【之】【都】【维】【也】【纳】【进】【修】【,】【1】【7】【8】【7】【年】【拜】【见】【了】【我】【所】【仰】【慕】【的】【莫】【扎】【特】【。】【听】【完】【我】【的】【演】【奏】【,】【莫】【扎】【特】【预】【言】【,】【‘】【有】【朝】【一】【日】【,】【你】【将】【震】【动】【全】【世】【界】【’】【。】【但】【不】【幸】【的】【是】【,】【我】【父】【亲】【酗】【酒】【,】【对】【待】【母】【亲】【整】【天】【是】【拳】【打】【脚】【踢】【,】【我】【尽】【管】【出】【生】【于】【音】【乐】【世】【家】【,】【而】【且】【从】【小】【就】【开】【始】【学】【习】【钢】【琴】【和】【提】【琴】【,】【但】【我】【并】【非】【莫】【扎】【特】【式】【的】【神】【童】【,】【我】【的】【创】【作】【并】【非】【一】【挥】【而】【就】【,】【而】【是】【孜】【孜】【不】【倦】【地】【修】【改】【草】【稿】【直】【至】【感】【到】【满】【意】【为】【止】【。】【我】【小】【时】【候】【的】【畸】【形】【家】【庭】【,】【造】【就】【了】【我】【的】【倔】【强】【孤】【僻】【、】【不】【善】【与】【人】【交】【往】【的】【性】【格】【。】【就】【像】【现】【在】【,】【你】【打】【扰】【了】【我】【,】【你】【不】【知】【道】【我】【现】【在】【很】【讨】【厌】【你】【。】【”】【我】【无】【言】【以】【对】【,】【他】【的】【生】【活】【竟】【然】【这】【样】【的】【艰】【辛】【。】【我】【错】【怪】【他】【了】【。】【“】【对】【不】【起】【,】【贝】【多】【芬】【先】【生】【,】【是】【我】【不】【对】【,】【勾】【起】【了】【你】【的】【伤】【心】【过】【去】【。】【但】【你】【不】【要】【撵】【我】【走】【,】【我】【理】【解】【你】【。】【每】【个】【人】【都】【有】【伤】【心】【的】【事】【,】【不】【单】【单】【是】【你】【。】【尽】【管】【你】【是】【名】【人】【,】【也】【一】【样】【的】【。】【”】【“】【啊】【,】【对】【不】【起】【,】【这】【位】【朋】【友】【,】【不】【,】【应】【该】【叫】【你】【同】【志】【。】【谢】【谢】【你】【对】【我】【这】【么】【了】【解】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【不】【过】【我】【想】【问】【你】【一】【个】【问】【题】【,】【对】【你】【来】【说】【,】【失】【聪】【是】【非】【常】【大】【的】【打】【击】【,】【你】【曾】【经】【悲】【伤】【过】【吗】【?】【”】【“】【你】【问】【得】【很】【好】【,】【对】【于】【我】【来】【说】【,】【失】【聪】【确】【实】【是】【非】【常】【大】【的】【打】【击】【,】【我】【也】【曾】【悲】【伤】【过】【,】【但】【后】【来】【我】【想】【通】【了】【,】【为】【什】【么】【要】【这】【样】【呢】【?】【人】【注】【定】【是】【要】【接】【受】【挫】【折】【的】【,】【不】【可】【能】【一】【帆】【风】【顺】【的】【,】【不】【要】【顾】【忌】【,】【勇】【往】【直】【前】【!】【”】【“】【真】【的】【很】【佩】【服】【你】【,】【你】【能】【介】【绍】【你】【成】【功】【的】【秘】【诀】【吗】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【当】【然】【可】【以】【,】【无】【论】【做】【什】【么】【事】【,】【都】【要】【持】【之】【以】【恒】【,】【永】【不】【气】【馁】【。】【不】【向】【命】【运】【低】【头】【。】【扼】【住】【命】【运】【的】【咽】【喉】【!】【”】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【次】【拜】【访】【使】【我】【受】【益】【匪】【浅】【,】【我】【知】【道】【了】【每】【个】【人】【都】【有】【自】【己】【的】【辉】【煌】【与】【失】【败】【,】【但】【对】【待】【命】【运】【不】【要】【气】【馁】【,】【面】【对】【挫】【折】【,】【要】【喊】【出】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【要】【扼】【住】【命】【运】【的】【咽】【喉】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【紧】【紧】【抓】【住】【“】【我】【要】【扼】【住】【命】【运】【的】【咽】【喉】【”】【这】【一】【点】【来】【写】【,】【作】【者】【突】【破】【时】【间】【和】【空】【间】【的】【束】【缚】【,】【在】【上】【下】【数】【百】【年】【间】【自】【由】【驰】【骋】【,】【模】【拟】【了】【一】【场】【旷】【古】【未】【有】【的】【访】【谈】【。】【想】【象】【奇】【特】【大】【胆】【,】【富】【有】【创】【意】【,】【具】【有】【浪】【漫】【主】【义】【色】【彩】【。】【贝】【多】【芬】【的】【回】【答】【揭】【示】【了】【“】【我】【要】【扼】【住】【命】【运】【的】【咽】【喉】【”】【的】【主】【题】【,】【文】【章】【文】【气】【充】【畅】【,】【神】【韵】【动】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【对】【比】【映】【衬】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【对】【比】【映】【衬】【法】【是】【指】【把】【事】【物】【、】【现】【象】【和】【过】【程】【中】【矛】【盾】【的】【双】【方】【,】【安】【置】【在】【一】【定】【条】【件】【下】【,】【使】【之】【集】【中】【在】【一】【个】【完】【整】【的】【统】【一】【体】【中】【,】【形】【成】【相】【辅】【相】【成】【的】【比】【照】【和】【呼】【应】【关】【系】【。】【运】【用】【这】【种】【手】【法】【,】【有】【利】【于】【充】【分】【显】【示】【事】【物】【的】【矛】【盾】【,】【突】【出】【被】【表】【现】【事】【物】【的】【本】【质】【特】【征】【,】【能】【引】【发】【读】【者】【反】【思】【,】【加】【强】【文】【章】【的】【艺】【术】【效】【果】【和】【感】【染】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【看】【下】【面】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【命】【因】【经】【历】【而】【精】【彩】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【济】【宁】【一】【考】【生】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【为】【何】【艳】【阳】【高】【照】【下】【帝】【王】【蝶】【可】【以】【翩】【然】【起】【舞】【?】【为】【何】【料】【峭】【寒】【冬】【中】【蜡】【梅】【清】【香】【扑】【鼻】【而】【来】【?】【又】【为】【何】【死】【神】【沙】【漠】【里】【胡】【杨】【创】【造】【出】【不】【死】【的】【神】【话】【?】【是】【它】【们】【的】【生】【命】【经】【历】【了】【艰】【难】【的】【付】【出】【而】【铸】【就】【 】【了】【辉】【煌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【濮】【水】【江】【边】【,】【楚】【王】【请】【你】【为】【相】【,】【你】【却】【淡】【然】【不】【动】【,】【神】【色】【自】【如】【,】【一】【句】【“】【吾】【将】【曳】【尾】【于】【涂】【中】【”】【便】【将】【世】【上】【所】【有】【的】【功】【名】【利】【禄】【抛】【之】【身】【外】【。】【你】【以】【不】【恋】【权】【势】【、】【清】【高】【归】【真】【、】【追】【求】【平】【凡】【的】【人】【生】【态】【度】【换】【取】【了】【一】【个】【陶】【然】【庄】【子】【,】【与】【蝶】【共】【舞】【,】【与】【鱼】【同】【戏】【。】【于】【是】【你】【的】【心】【得】【到】【了】【永】【恒】【的】【洁】【净】【与】【恬】【然】【,】【于】【是】【你】【得】【以】【同】【大】【鹏】【展】【翅】【同】【飞】【,】【直】【冲】【九】【霄】【云】【外】【。】【你】【以】【自】【己】【独】【特】【的】【人】【生】【经】【历】【向】【世】【人】【诠】【释】【了】【生】【命】【的】【精】【彩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【金】【銮】【殿】【上】【的】【一】【声】【怒】【吼】【使】【你】【在】【瞬】【间】【失】【去】【所】【有】【。】【圣】【上】【不】【明】【白】【你】【那】【颗】【“】【欲】【为】【圣】【明】【除】【弊】【事】【,】【肯】【将】【衰】【朽】【惜】【残】【年】【”】【的】【赤】【胆】【忠】【心】【,】【结】【果】【贬】【你】【去】【潮】【州】【。】【你】【泪】【水】【涟】【涟】【,】【一】【步】【三】【回】【头】【。】【此】【时】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【要】【问】【:】【“】【你】【后】【悔】【吗】【,】【付】【出】【如】【此】【昂】【贵】【的】【代】【价】【去】【劝】【谏】【一】【位】【昏】【君】【?】【”】【我】【想】【答】【案】【是】【否】【定】【的】【。】【你】【若】【后】【悔】【,】【便】【会】【在】【潮】【州】【鱼】【肉】【百】【姓】【,】【搜】【脂】【刮】【财】【;】【你】【若】【后】【悔】【,】【便】【会】【筹】【备】【兵】【力】【,】【谋】【反】【皇】【帝】【。】【而】【你】【没】【有】【,】【所】【以】【你】【把】【先】【进】【的】【耕】【种】【技】【术】【带】【入】【潮】【州】【,】【所】【以】【你】【兴】【修】【水】【利】【,】【便】【民】【灌】【溉】【,】【所】【以】【你】【和】【农】【民】【一】【同】【站】【在】【垄】【上】【讨】【论】【潮】【州】【适】【宜】【种】【植】【的】【经】【济】【作】【物】【,】【所】【以】【你】【笑】【吟】【吟】【地】【诵】【出】【“】【白】【雪】【却】【嫌】【春】【色】【晚】【,】【故】【穿】【庭】【院】【作】【飞】【花】【”】【的】【诗】【句】【。】【因】【此】【,】【我】【在】【那】【散】【发】【着】【清】【香】【的】【历】【史】【长】【卷】【中】【,】【看】【到】【一】【个】【闪】【耀】【着】【光】【彩】【的】【名】【字】【—】【—】【韩】【愈】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【众】【所】【周】【知】【,】【如】【今】【世】【界】【台】【球】【冠】【军】【是】【一】【位】【乳】【臭】【未】【干】【的】【小】【子】【—】【—】【丁】【俊】【晖】【。】【为】【什】【么】【他】【会】【取】【得】【辉】【煌】【的】【成】【就】【?】【当】【我】【们】【撒】【丫】【子】【在】【院】【子】【中】【疯】【跑】【的】【时】【候】【,】【他】【便】【在】【封】【闭】【的】【球】【室】【里】【练】【球】【了】【;】【当】【我】【们】【讨】【论】【着】【哪】【个】【动】【画】【片】【好】【看】【时】【,】【他】【也】【在】【封】【闭】【的】【球】【室】【里】【练】【球】【;】【当】【我】【们】【坐】【在】【敞】【亮】【的】【教】【室】【里】【读】【书】【时】【,】【他】【还】【在】【练】【球】【;】【当】【我】【们】【肆】【无】【忌】【惮】【地】【挥】【洒】【青】【春】【时】【,】【他】【在】【台】【球】【桌】【上】【挥】【汗】【如】【雨】【。】【正】【是】【因】【为】【他】【经】【历】【了】【艰】【辛】【的】【付】【出】【,】【使】【他】【成】【为】【台】【球】【界】【中】【最】【新】【最】【亮】【的】【一】【颗】【星】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【古】【之】【贤】【人】【,】【今】【之】【能】【者】【,】【他】【们】【的】【人】【生】【都】【因】【经】【历】【了】【艰】【苦】【的】【付】【出】【而】【辉】【煌】【。】【让】【我】【们】【把】【握】【青】【春】【的】【航】【向】【,】【惜】【时】【、】【勤】【奋】【,】【写】【就】【自】【己】【人】【生】【的】【精】【彩】【,】【留】【下】【一】【段】【难】【忘】【的】【经】【历】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【题】【是】【“】【生】【命】【因】【经】【历】【而】【精】【彩】【”】【,】【文】【章】【主】【体】【部】【分】【,】【主】【要】【选】【取】【了】【庄】【子】【、】【韩】【愈】【和】【丁】【俊】【晖】【这】【三】【个】【人】【物】【的】【事】【例】【来】【论】【证】【论】【点】【,】【庄】【子】【和】【楚】【王】【对】【待】【人】【生】【的】【看】【法】【是】【相】【反】【的】【,】【韩】【愈】【和】【“】【圣】【上】【”】【在】【知】【人】【方】【面】【是】【对】【立】【的】【,】【两】【相】【对】【比】【,】【更】【显】【庄】【子】【和】【韩】【愈】【的】【光】【彩】【人】【生】【;】【而】【用】【丁】【俊】【晖】【作】【论】【证】【时】【,】【则】【以】【“】【我】【们】【撒】【丫】【子】【在】【院】【子】【中】【疯】【跑】【的】【时】【候】【”】【,】【“】【他】【在】【封】【闭】【的】【球】【室】【里】【练】【球】【”】【,】【“】【我】【们】【讨】【论】【着】【哪】【个】【动】【画】【片】【好】【看】【时】【”】【,】【“】【他】【也】【在】【封】【闭】【的】【球】【室】【里】【练】【球】【”】【等】【相】【映】【衬】【,】【这】【就】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【丁】【俊】【晖】【的】【成】【功】【是】【经】【历】【艰】【辛】【的】【付】【出】【才】【获】【得】【的】【。】【此】【外】【还】【有】【修】【辞】【的】【娴】【熟】【运】【用】【。】【开】【头】【运】【用】【排】【比】【设】【问】【引】【出】【论】【点】【,】【气】【势】【非】【凡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【类】【比】【映】【衬】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【类】【比】【映】【衬】【法】【是】【指】【把】【两】【个】【或】【多】【个】【人】【物】【的】【某】【些】【相】【同】【或】【相】【似】【性】【质】【的】【素】【材】【放】【一】【起】【,】【以】【加】【强】【文】【章】【论】【述】【力】【度】【和】【可】【信】【度】【。】【类】【比】【的】【出】【发】【点】【是】【人】【物】【素】【材】【之】【间】【的】【相】【似】【性】【,】【或】【者】【说】【,】【就】【是】【同】【类】【素】【材】【的】【并】【列】【呈】【现】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【看】【下】【面】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【,】【来】【了】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【河】【北】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【来】【了】【,】【梦】【醒】【了】【,】【心】【碎】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【风】【多】【,】【雨】【相】【和】【,】【夜】【长】【人】【奈】【何】【。】【秋】【风】【裹】【挟】【着】【细】【雨】【,】【凄】【楚】【地】【洒】【落】【在】【枯】【叶】【上】【,】【沙】【沙】【沙】【沙】【,】【如】【同】【哀】【怨】【的】【妇】【人】【在】【低】【声】【啜】【泣】【,】【一】【声】【声】【总】【能】【拨】【动】【内】【心】【深】【处】【隐】【秘】【的】【琴】【弦】【。】【一】【阵】【晚】【来】【风】【急】【,】【彻】【骨】【的】【寒】【意】【凄】【苦】【了】【诗】【人】【的】【心】【,】【一】【首】【首】【凄】【美】【的】【诗】【篇】【便】【从】【诗】【人】【心】【中】【涌】【起】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【梧】【桐】【细】【雨】【冷】【清】【秋】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【更】【梦】【醒】【,】【窗】【外】【雨】【疏】【风】【急】【,】【一】【声】【梧】【桐】【一】【声】【秋】【,】【一】【丝】【秋】【雨】【一】【点】【愁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【从】【梦】【中】【醒】【来】【。】【不】【,】【不】【能】【说】【是】【梦】【,】【因】【为】【她】【何】【曾】【入】【睡】【?】【就】【在】【半】【梦】【半】【醒】【中】【,】【丝】【丝】【往】【事】【涌】【上】【心】【头】【。】【此】【时】【她】【眼】【中】【露】【出】【了】【一】【丝】【少】【女】【的】【羞】【涩】【,】【“】【和】【羞】【走】【,】【倚】【门】【回】【首】【,】【却】【把】【青】【梅】【嗅】【”】【的】【甜】【蜜】【涌】【上】【心】【头】【;】【孤】【灯】【摇】【曳】【,】【迷】【离】【了】【她】【的】【双】【眼】【,】【秋】【夜】【如】【水】【,】【一】【缕】【寒】【意】【聚】【上】【心】【头】【。】【一】【叶】【扁】【舟】【浮】【于】【江】【中】【,】【虽】【是】【江】【上】【春】【好】【,】【却】【无】【奈】【心】【中】【的】【孤】【寂】【,】【一】【盏】【薄】【酒】【,】【几】【朵】【菊】【花】【,】【怎】【敌】【晚】【来】【风】【疾】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【阵】【秋】【雨】【,】【一】【丝】【离】【愁】【。】【不】【知】【是】【秋】【雨】【碎】【了】【她】【的】【梦】【,】【还】【是】【她】【的】【梦】【融】【入】【了】【这】【凄】【苦】【的】【秋】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【巴】【山】【夜】【雨】【话】【别】【情】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【夜】【雨】【交】【织】【,】【绵】【绵】【密】【密】【,】【淅】【淅】【沥】【沥】【。】【一】【夜】【不】【眠】【是】【孤】【客】【,】【羁】【旅】【窗】【外】【有】【芭】【蕉】【。】【残】【烛】【独】【剪】【,】【夜】【深】【难】【寐】【,】【李】【商】【隐】【手】【捧】【家】【书】【,】【哀】【愁】【如】【同】【巴】【山】【的】【秋】【雨】【弥】【漫】【。】【(】【略】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【浔】【阳】【江】【头】【琵】【琶】【行】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【浔】【阳】【江】【头】【,】【枫】【叶】【荻】【花】【在】【秋】【风】【中】【瑟】【瑟】【。】【主】【人】【下】【马】【立】【于】【江】【畔】【,】【客】【人】【已】【登】【船】【将】【别】【,】【举】【起】【酒】【杯】【,】【让】【我】【们】【痛】【饮】【这】【离】【别】【酒】【吧】【!】【可】【惜】【没】【有】【音】【乐】【。】【(】【略】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【风】【起】【,】【秋】【雨】【浓】【,】【梧】【桐】【芭】【蕉】【夜】【雨】【声】【。】【秋】【意】【老】【,】【愁】【丝】【层】【层】【,】【几】【曲】【秋】【声】【,】【哀】【怨】【几】【重】【。】【秋】【来】【了】【,】【带】【来】【无】【限】【的】【哀】【思】【,】【留】【下】【无】【数】【凄】【美】【的】【诗】【篇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【开】【篇】【就】【用】【“】【一】【首】【首】【凄】【美】【的】【诗】【篇】【便】【从】【诗】【人】【心】【中】【涌】【起】【”】【领】【起】【全】【篇】【,】【主】【体】【部】【分】【用】【三】【个】【小】【标】【题】【先】【区】【隔】【再】【串】【联】【,】【使】【三】【个】【小】【内】【容】【各】【自】【独】【立】【又】【相】【互】【映】【衬】【,】【紧】【紧】【围】【绕】【“】【秋】【”】【来】【写】【。】【其】【中】【借】【用】【了】【李】【清】【照】【、】【李】【商】【隐】【、】【白】【居】【易】【三】【位】【诗】【人】【的】【写】【秋】【名】【作】【,】【用】【优】【美】【的】【语】【言】【对】【三】【首】【诗】【做】【了】【进】【一】【步】【的】【解】【读】【,】【生】【动】【地】【还】【原】【了】【诗】【人】【创】【作】【的】【情】【境】【,】【显】【示】【出】【了】【作】【者】【深】【厚】【的】【积】【累】【。】【结】【尾】【再】【次】【扣】【题】【,】【深】【化】【感】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】糖尿病最新治疗【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【爱】【蓝】【色】【的】【海】【,】【不】【,】【那】【是】【一】【种】【由】【衷】【的】【崇】【拜】【,】【崇】【拜】【她】【的】【静】【谧】【,】【崇】【拜】【她】【的】【沧】【桑】【,】【崇】【拜】【她】【无】【与】【伦】【比】【的】【韵】【味】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【晨】【,】【太】【阳】【还】【未】【升】【起】【,】【海】【浪】【轻】【拍】【着】【安】【睡】【中】【的】【沙】【岸】【,】【能】【看】【到】【寥】【若】【晨】【星】【的】【岸】【礁】【,】【孤】【傲】【地】【凝】【望】【着】【蓝】【海】【,】【踌】【躇】【满】【志】【,】【守】【护】【这】【一】【份】【安】【宁】【。】【晨】【雾】【朦】【胧】【,】【是】【一】【块】【最】【美】【的】【纱】【巾】【,】【挡】【在】【浅】【笑】【着】【的】【海】【的】【脸】【上】【,】【羞】【涩】【唯】【美】【。】【我】【第】【一】【次】【觉】【得】【静】【谧】【的】【海】【也】【是】【不】【失】【优】【雅】【的】【。】【放】【眼】【望】【去】【,】【天】【边】【渐】【洇】【了】【一】【抹】【金】【红】【色】【,】【海】【面】【荡】【起】【了】【深】【邃】【的】【波】【浪】【,】【仿】【佛】【是】【一】【瞬】【间】【,】【火】【红】【的】【太】【阳】【喷】【薄】【而】【出】【,】【放】【射】【出】【万】【丈】【金】【光】【,】【直】【射】【入】【海】【,】【唤】【醒】【了】【熟】【睡】【中】【的】【鱼】【儿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【空】【的】【颜】【色】【由】【暗】【转】【明】【,】【由】【那】【墨】【蓝】【变】【成】【了】【鲜】【明】【的】【天】【蓝】【色】【,】【由】【远】【及】【近】【。】【海】【洋】【苏】【醒】【了】【,】【不】【知】【是】【被】【那】【清】【脆】【的】【海】【螺】【声】【感】【染】【了】【呢】【?】【还】【是】【被】【几】【声】【海】【鸟】【的】【鸣】【叫】【唤】【醒】【了】【呢】【?】【海】【水】【也】【清】【透】【了】【起】【来】【,】【远】【望】【那】【烟】【波】【浩】【渺】【的】【海】【,】【漾】【起】【了】【成】【百】【上】【千】【的】【极】【细】【的】【碧】【波】【,】【又】【向】【岸】【上】【扩】【散】【,】【最】【后】【成】【了】【高】【高】【的】【巨】【浪】【拍】【在】【松】【软】【的】【沙】【滩】【上】【,】【此】【时】【,】【海】【天】【一】【色】【,】【两】【者】【的】【线】【条】【弥】【合】【在】【一】【起】【已】【无】【界】【限】【,】【似】【画】【非】【画】【,】【似】【真】【非】【真】【,】【绚】【烂】【耀】【眼】【得】【很】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【海】【浪】【又】【来】【凑】【热】【闹】【喽】【!】【送】【上】【朵】【朵】【白】【花】【,】【溅】【起】【了】【许】【多】【粒】【明】【珠】【,】【围】【簇】【在】【礁】【石】【和】【金】【沙】【的】【身】【上】【,】【而】【后】【又】【消】【失】【得】【无】【影】【无】【踪】【。】【云】【儿】【映】【在】【水】【中】【,】【像】【出】【海】【的】【白】【渔】【船】【满】【载】【而】【归】【,】【白】【色】【和】【蓝】【色】【也】【融】【合】【在】【一】【起】【,】【形】【成】【轻】【快】【的】【浅】【蓝】【色】【。】【在】【这】【安】【静】【的】【世】【界】【里】【,】【仿】【佛】【一】【切】【事】【物】【都】【已】【静】【止】【,】【只】【有】【那】【海】【翻】【腾】【不】【息】【。】【我】【渴】【望】【抵】【达】【的】【是】【对】【面】【的】【小】【岛】【,】【那】【种】【渴】【望】【是】【那】【么】【的】【急】【切】【,】【 】【因】【为】【那】【岛】【上】【郁】【郁】【葱】【葱】【,】【朦】【朦】【胧】【胧】【,】【梦】【幻】【一】【般】【。】【然】【而】【却】【没】【有】【船】【,】【似】【乎】【是】【可】【望】【而】【不】【可】【即】【呀】【!】【若】【如】【此】【说】【来】【,】【我】【想】【海】【浪】【就】【如】【同】【人】【生】【的】【一】【次】【次】【攀】【登】【,】【而】【那】【岛】【亦】【如】【我】【们】【的】【梦】【想】【,】【如】【果】【没】【有】【望】【眼】【欲】【穿】【的】【等】【待】【则】【没】【有】【前】【进】【的】【动】【力】【和】【人】【生】【的】【机】【遇】【,】【更】【谈】【不】【上】【什】【么】【成】【功】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【海】【风】【就】【这】【样】【轻】【抚】【着】【我】【的】【额】【头】【,】【带】【走】【了】【我】【的】【遐】【思】【。】【蔚】【蓝】【的】【海】【增】【添】【了】【几】【分】【幻】【想】【与】【期】【盼】【,】【暂】【且】【不】【谈】【其】【他】【事】【,】【只】【在】【这】【碧】【海】【青】【天】【下】【卧】【在】【金】【滩】【上】【,】【待】【海】【浪】【浸】【透】【全】【身】【,】【若】【有】【若】【无】【的】【,】【正】【是】【我】【们】【所】【追】【求】【的】【宁】【静】【。】【轻】【捧】【上】【细】【沙】【,】【待】【它】【们】【静】【静】【流】【走】【,】【好】【像】【我】【也】【融】【入】【海】【浪】【中】【了】【,】【随】【着】【它】【拍】【打】【着】【彼】【岸】【,】【终】【有】【一】【天】【会】【实】【现】【梦】【想】【。】【海】【的】【韵】【味】【真】【的】【很】【浓】【,】【只】【有】【慢】【慢】【地】【品】【味】【,】【才】【能】【让】【心】【灵】【宁】【静】【、】【放】【松】【,】【真】【正】【地】【享】【受】【这】【蓝】【海】【之】【韵】【,】【真】【正】【地】【融】【入】【生】【活】【,】【融】【入】【自】【然】【,】【这】【便】【是】【海】【洋】【,】【蓝】【色】【的】【梦】【想】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【赵】【建】【香】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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              【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【岁】【月】【的】【滋】【味】【实】【在】【是】【很】【美】【妙】【。】【亲】【历】【过】【初】【三】【,】【真】【切】【地】【感】【悟】【到】【初】【三】【是】【一】【个】【圆】【梦】【的】【舞】【台】【,】【这】【里】【有】【悲】【伤】【、】【有】【辛】【苦】【、】【有】【理】【想】【与】【追】【求】【、】【有】【拼】【搏】【与】【竞】【争】【,】【更】【有】【欢】【乐】【与】【真】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【学】【习】【不】【再】【像】【以】【前】【那】【样】【轻】【松】【了】【,】【每】【天】【除】【了】【作】【业】【还】【是】【作】【业】【,】【不】【是】【老】【师】【的】【谆】【谆】【教】【诲】【,】【就】【是】【父】【母】【的】【苦】【口】【婆】【心】【。】【桌】【上】【书】【本】【堆】【如】【山】【,】【往】【往】【下】【课】【铃】【响】【过】【之】【后】【,】【我】【们】【还】【在】【苦】【学】【不】【倦】【。】【“】【面】【临】【中】【考】【”】【像】【一】【块】【大】【石】【头】【压】【在】【我】【的】【心】【头】【,】【似】【乎】【一】【不】【留】【神】【,】【这】【个】【沉】【重】【的】【担】【子】【就】【会】【把】【我】【压】【得】【粉】【身】【碎】【骨】【。】【没】【有】【法】【子】【,】【只】【能】【奋】【力】【前】【行】【。】【而】【到】【了】【第】【二】【学】【期】【,】【月】【考】【、】【联】【考】【、】【模】【拟】【考】【,】【各】【科】【试】【卷】【像】【雪】【片】【似】【的】【向】【我】【们】【袭】【来】【,】【不】【到】【两】【个】【月】【,】【就】【填】【满】【了】【桌】【斗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【生】【活】【充】【满】【了】【紧】【张】【感】【,】【但】【我】【们】【的】【心】【里】【仍】【然】【充】【满】【希】【望】【、】【充】【满】【幻】【想】【、】【充】【满】【美】【好】【。】【学】【校】【的】【一】【切】【,】【在】【我】【眼】【中】【是】【那】【样】【的】【熟】【悉】【,】【它】【带】【给】【我】【希】【望】【,】【带】【给】【我】【信】【心】【。】【在】【某】【次】【考】【试】【失】【败】【后】【,】【我】【会】【加】【倍】【努】【力】【,】【总】【结】【经】【验】【,】【继】【续】【前】【进】【,】【让】【不】【可】【能】【的】【事】【变】【成】【可】【能】【。】【我】【决】【不】【会】【轻】【易】【说】【不】【可】【能】【,】【我】【坚】【信】【我】【一】【定】【会】【取】【得】【成】【功】【。】【经】【历】【了】【许】【多】【困】【难】【和】【艰】【辛】【,】【也】【战】【胜】【了】【许】【多】【磨】【难】【,】【每】【当】【我】【奋】【力】【拼】【搏】【时】【,】【遥】【远】【的】【曙】【光】【在】【激】【励】【着】【我】【努】【力】【向】【前】【,】【我】【相】【信】【自】【己】【的】【拼】【搏】【必】【能】【换】【来】【最】【后】【的】【一】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【岁】【月】【给】【了】【我】【们】【困】【难】【,】【我】【们】【在】【人】【生】【第】【一】【道】【门】【前】【摸】【爬】【滚】【打】【地】【寻】【找】【道】【路】【;】【初】【三】【岁】【月】【给】【了】【我】【们】【心】【灵】【上】【的】【成】【熟】【,】【我】【们】【已】【经】【懂】【得】【困】【难】【的】【不】【是】【付】【出】【,】【而】【是】【付】【出】【往】【往】【是】【收】【获】【的】【几】【倍】【;】【初】【三】【岁】【月】【给】【了】【我】【们】【对】【生】【活】【的】【热】【爱】【,】【我】【们】【珍】【惜】【从】【指】【缝】【间】【挤】【出】【的】【每】【一】【秒】【钟】【…】【…】【这】【些】【足】【以】【让】【我】【们】【迎】【接】【它】【,】【珍】【惜】【它】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【奋】【斗】【也】【有】【乐】【趣】【。】【当】【我】【们】【把】【理】【想】【、】【志】【向】【、】【情】【感】【、】【追】【求】【和】【我】【们】【每】【天】【所】【做】【的】【一】【切】【—】【—】【听】【每】【一】【节】【课】【,】【做】【每】【一】【次】【作】【业】【,】【答】【每】【一】【份】【试】【卷】【紧】【密】【结】【合】【起】【来】【时】【,】【我】【们】【感】【觉】【到】【的】【,】【就】【不】【会】【是】【疲】【惫】【、】【焦】【躁】【、】【烦】【心】【,】【我】【们】【会】【体】【验】【到】【无】【比】【的】【幸】【福】【和】【快】【乐】【。】【十】【年】【的】【求】【学】【之】【路】【,】【风】【霜】【雨】【雪】【,】【如】【今】【到】【了】【一】【个】【驿】【站】【,】【要】【为】【自】【己】【的】【理】【想】【迈】【出】【艰】【难】【的】【一】【大】【步】【。】【初】【三】【的】【生】【活】【虽】【苦】【,】【但】【苦】【中】【有】【乐】【,】【有】【时】【在】【题】【海】【里】【遨】【游】【,】【以】【求】【知】【为】【目】【标】【,】【获】【得】【了】【更】【多】【真】【才】【实】【学】【,】【心】【里】【也】【感】【到】【快】【乐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【啊】【,】【难】【忘】【初】【三】【岁】【月】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【经】【历】【了】【初】【三】【的】【学】【习】【生】【活】【,】【有】【了】【深】【切】【的】【感】【受】【,】【流】【露】【笔】【端】【的】【是】【紧】【张】【、】【拼】【搏】【、】【苦】【中】【有】【乐】【。】【因】【为】【它】【只】【有】【一】【次】【,】【而】【且】【是】【人】【生】【中】【的】【第】【一】【次】【重】【大】【的】【抉】【择】【。】【文】【章】【有】【层】【次】【地】【写】【出】【了】【自】【己】【的】【真】【实】【经】【历】【和】【难】【忘】【的】【感】【受】【,】【是】【大】【多】【数】【初】【三】【学】【子】【的】【亲】【身】【体】【验】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【达】【成】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】糖尿病最新治疗【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【题】【回】【放】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【理】【解】【,】【往】【往】【是】【一】【个】【曲】【折】【的】【过】【程】【;】【理】【解】【,】【需】【要】【智】【慧】【的】【闪】【光】【,】【心】【灵】【的】【沟】【通】【,】【时】【间】【的】【见】【证】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【理】【解】【是】【个】【慢】【慢】【的】【过】【程】【”】【为】【题】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【求】【:】【①】【除】【诗】【歌】【外】【文】【体】【不】【限】【;】【②】【字】【数】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【;】【③】【文】【中】【不】【要】【出】【现】【真】【实】【的】【地】【名】【、】【校】【名】【和】【人】【名】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【江】【苏】【常】【州】【市】【中】【考】【已】【连】【续】【四】【年】【考】【全】【命】【题】【作】【文】【(】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【《】【你】【在】【我】【心】【里】【》】【、】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【《】【传】【递】【》】【、】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【《】【家】【乡】【的】【个】【性】【》】【或】【《】【班】【级】【的】【个】【性】【》】【)】【,】【体】【现】【了】【该】【市】【作】【文】【命】【题】【格】【局】【的】【稳】【定】【性】【。】【写】【好】【这】【道】【题】【,】【必】【须】【着】【重】【注】【意】【以】【下】【几】【点】【:】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【首】【先】【,】【细】【审】【题】【意】【,】【把】【握】【关】【键】【。】【这】【道】【题】【有】【意】【蕴】【但】【不】【隐】【晦】【,】【不】【太】【实】【也】【不】【太】【虚】【,】【绝】【大】【多】【数】【考】【生】【都】【能】【从】【题】【目】【中】【悟】【出】【写】【作】【指】【向】【。】【但】【如】【果】【审】【题】【不】【细】【,】【也】【会】【出】【现】【偏】【离】【题】【意】【或】【扣】【题】【不】【紧】【的】【现】【象】【。】【审】【题】【的】【关】【键】【在】【于】【准】【确】【把】【握】【“】【题】【眼】【”】【。】【“】【慢】【慢】【的】【”】【是】【题】【眼】【,】【增】【强】【了】【题】【目】【的】【张】【力】【。】【“】【慢】【慢】【的】【过】【程】【”】【,】【就】【是】【由】【“】【不】【理】【解】【”】【到】【“】【有】【所】【理】【解】【”】【再】【到】【“】【理】【解】【”】【的】【变】【化】【过】【程】【,】【是】【一】【个】【“】【欲】【速】【则】【不】【达】【”】【的】【过】【程】【。】【你】【理】【解】【了】【从】【“】【理】【解】【”】【的】【时】【间】【维】【度】【上】【看】【是】【“】【慢】【慢】【的】【”】【,】【从】【“】【理】【解】【”】【的】【内】【容】【维】【度】【看】【是】【“】【逐】【步】【深】【入】【”】【的】【,】【若】【再】【辅】【之】【以】【很】【好】【地】【表】【达】【,】【文】【章】【就】【会】【异】【彩】【大】【放】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【次】【,】【拓】【展】【空】【间】【,】【严】【格】【选】【材】【。】【生】【活】【中】【关】【于】【“】【理】【解】【”】【的】【话】【题】【比】【比】【皆】【是】【。】【一】【般】【说】【来】【,】【选】【材】【的】【角】【度】【有】【二】【:】【一】【是】【自】【己】【对】【于】【“】【事】【”】【“】【人】【”】【“】【理】【”】【的】【理】【解】【;】【二】【是】【别】【人】【对】【于】【自】【己】【的】【理】【解】【。】【因】【此】【,】【可】【以】【选】【择】【对】【“】【人】【”】【的】【理】【解】【的】【材】【料】【来】【写】【,】【也】【可】【以】【选】【择】【“】【我】【”】【对】【别】【人】【的】【理】【解】【或】【别】【人】【对】【“】【我】【”】【的】【理】【解】【的】【材】【料】【来】【写】【;】【可】【以】【选】【择】【对】【“】【事】【”】【或】【“】【物】【”】【的】【理】【解】【的】【材】【料】【来】【写】【,】【也】【可】【以】【选】【择】【对】【“】【理】【”】【或】【“】【情】【”】【的】【材】【料】【来】【写】【,】【等】【等】【。】【这】【里】【要】【提】【醒】【大】【家】【注】【意】【的】【是】【选】【择】【材】【料】【贵】【在】【一】【个】【“】【严】【”】【字】【,】【“】【像】【关】【卡】【的】【税】【吏】【似】【的】【百】【般】【挑】【剔】【”】【,】【从】【而】【选】【择】【突】【出】【中】【心】【的】【材】【料】【,】【选】【择】【真】【实】【而】【典】【型】【的】【材】【料】【,】【选】【择】【新】【颖】【而】【生】【动】【的】【材】【料】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【次】【,】【倾】【注】【情】【感】【,】【挖】【掘】【主】【旨】【。】【可】【以】【这】【么】【说】【,】【“】【理】【解】【”】【发】【于】【情】【,】【也】【止】【于】【情】【。】【情】【感】【是】【否】【真】【实】【、】【是】【否】【丰】【富】【,】【决】【定】【着】【文】【章】【的】【成】【败】【。】【要】【找】【准】【寄】【情】【的】【载】【体】【:】【可】【以】【是】【人】【,】【也】【可】【以】【是】【物】【;】【可】【以】【是】【景】【,】【也】【可】【以】【是】【事】【。】【要】【灵】【活】【运】【用】【阅】【读】【课】【上】【学】【到】【的】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【来】【描】【写】【“】【过】【程】【”】【,】【用】【心】【描】【写】【出】【动】【情】【细】【节】【,】【在】【铺】【垫】【到】【位】【的】【基】【础】【上】【及】【时】【地】【抒】【发】【情】【感】【。】【坚】【决】【杜】【绝】【那】【些】【空】【洞】【的】【、】【夸】【大】【的】【、】【不】【实】【的】【、】【矫】【情】【式】【的】【抒】【情】【语】【言】【。】【深】【化】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【的】【方】【法】【有】【三】【:】【一】【是】【正】【反】【对】【比】【。】【或】【将】【矛】【盾】【冲】【突】【后】【有】【人】【理】【解】【、】【有】【人】【漠】【然】【的】【言】【行】【进】【行】【对】【比】【;】【或】【将】【有】【人】【先】【不】【理】【解】【、】【后】【理】【解】【的】【言】【行】【进】【行】【对】【比】【,】【给】【读】【者】【更】【多】【的】【思】【考】【空】【间】【。】【二】【是】【逐】【层】【求】【问】【。】【沿】【着】【“】【是】【什】【么】【—】【—】【为】【什】【么】【—】【—】【怎】【么】【办】【”】【的】【顺】【序】【思】【考】【,】【深】【挖】【出】【现】【象】【背】【后】【的】【本】【质】【规】【律】【之】【所】【在】【,】【给】【读】【者】【以】【更】【多】【的】【启】【示】【。】【三】【是】【逆】【向】【解】【读】【。】【事】【物】【总】【是】【一】【分】【为】【二】【的】【,】【对】【于】【某】【个】【材】【料】【,】【撇】【开】【常】【规】【性】【的】【视】【角】【和】【观】【点】【,】【提】【出】【全】【新】【的】【看】【法】【,】【这】【也】【是】【可】【行】【之】【举】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【选】【好】【文】【体】【,】【凸】【显】【个】【性】【。】【“】【除】【诗】【歌】【外】【文】【体】【不】【限】【”】【,】【就】【可】【以】【根】【据】【自】【己】【的】【写】【作】【特】【长】【选】【择】【适】【合】【自】【己】【的】【文】【体】【,】【并】【且】【在】【构】【思】【中】【努】【力】【突】【出】【选】【定】【的】【文】【体】【特】【征】【。】【你】【可】【以】【有】【疏】【有】【密】【、】【有】【张】【有】【弛】【地】【叙】【事】【,】【写】【出】【从】【“】【不】【理】【解】【”】【到】【“】【理】【解】【”】【的】【过】【程】【;】【可】【以】【洋】【洋】【洒】【洒】【地】【抒】【情】【,】【抒】【发】【自】【己】【对】【“】【理】【解】【是】【个】【慢】【慢】【的】【过】【程】【”】【的】【感】【受】【;】【也】【可】【以】【有】【理】【有】【据】【地】【议】【论】【,】【论】【述】【为】【什】【么】【说】【“】【理】【解】【是】【个】【慢】【慢】【的】【过】【程】【”】【。】【 】【譬】【如】【有】【的】【人】【不】【赞】【同】【“】【慢】【慢】【的】【过】【程】【”】【,】【而】【认】【为】【“】【理】【解】【”】【应】【该】【有】【一】【定】【的】【时】【效】【,】【否】【则】【,】【等】【到】【你】【“】【理】【解】【”】【了】【,】【悲】【剧】【也】【早】【已】【发】【生】【了】【。】【你】【可】【以】【对】【这】【种】【现】【象】【说】【长】【道】【短】【,】【写】【成】【议】【论】【文】【,】【以】【弥】【补】【独】【特】【价】【值】【观】【的】【呈】【现】【。】【你】【还】【可】【以】【对】【常】【规】【化】【的】【题】【材】【,】【采】【用】【镜】【头】【组】【接】【、】【日】【记】【连】【缀】【、】【标】【题】【贯】【穿】【甚】【至】【辩】【论】【记】【录】【、】【书】【信】【倾】【诉】【等】【创】【新】【形】【式】【,】【为】【赢】【得】【高】【分】【打】【下】【坚】【实】【的】【基】【础】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【一】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【理】【解】【是】【个】【慢】【慢】【的】【过】【程】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【常】【州】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【随】【父】【母】【我】【转】【学】【到】【这】【所】【学】【校】【已】【经】【一】【个】【多】【月】【了】【,】【大】【概】【是】【我】【脾】【气】【不】【错】【的】【缘】【故】【吧】【,】【人】【缘】【特】【别】【好】【,】【交】【了】【不】【少】【好】【朋】【友】【。】【可】【我】【总】【感】【觉】【到】【有】【什】【么】【人】【在】【注】【意】【着】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唉】【,】【算】【了】【吧】【,】【别】【自】【作】【多】【情】【了】【,】【说】【不】【定】【是】【错】【觉】【。】【再】【说】【,】【第】【六】【感】【觉】【也】【有】【失】【误】【的】【时】【候】【。】【甭】【管】【这】【些】【了】【,】【应】【该】【认】【真】【学】【习】【,】【学】【习】【第】【一】【嘛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【0】【月】【1】【3】【日】【小】【雨】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【天】【,】【我】【来】【到】【教】【室】【。】【打】【开】【作】【业】【本】【,】【发】【现】【里】【面】【夹】【着】【一】【张】【折】【叠】【得】【十】【分】【精】【致】【的】【信】【纸】【,】【心】【想】【:】【大】【概】【又】【是】【宿】【舍】【里】【那】【些】【鬼】【灵】【精】【的】【丫】【头】【片】【子】【想】【出】【来】【的】【馊】【主】【意】【吧】【。】【可】【我】【打】【开】【一】【看】【,】【原】【来】【是】【和】【我】【隔】【了】【一】【个】【“】【走】【廊】【”】【的】【男】【生】【写】【的】【。】【他】【的】【名】【字】【叫】【强】【,】【说】【什】【么】【想】【要】【和】【我】【做】【朋】【友】【,】【但】【又】【不】【好】【当】【面】【说】【,】【而】【且】【还】【写】【了】【一】【大】【堆】【理】【由】【,】【满】【满】【一】【大】【张】【信】【纸】【。】【他】【这】【个】【人】【,】【也】【真】【奇】【怪】【,】【莫】【名】【其】【妙】【,】【我】【也】【没】【在】【意】【,】【就】【把】【信】【纸】【扔】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【0】【月】【1】【5】【日】【 】【晴】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【天】【,】【强】【又】【来】【信】【了】【,】【催】【着】【要】【我】【告】【诉】【他】【结】【果】【,】【而】【且】【又】【是】【满】【满】【一】【大】【张】【,】【真】【让】【人】【不】【理】【解】【。】【只】【好】【胡】【乱】【地】【写】【了】【一】【句】【:】【“】【我】【们】【本】【来】【就】【是】【朋】【友】【,】【不】【用】【再】【写】【信】【了】【。】【”】【估】【计】【可】【以】【搪】【塞】【过】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【0】【月】【1】【6】【日】【 】【晴】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【个】【人】【,】【可】【真】【难】【缠】【,】【没】【想】【到】【强】【今】【天】【又】【写】【信】【给】【我】【了】【。】【文】【字】【很】【隐】【晦】【,】【但】【我】【能】【够】【理】【解】【里】【面】【的】【含】【意】【。】【真】【后】【悔】【,】【现】【在】【该】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【实】【,】【强】【长】【得】【挺】【帅】【,】【学】【习】【又】【特】【别】【棒】【,】【可】【最】【近】【他】【的】【成】【绩】【明】【显】【下】【降】【了】【。】【天】【哪】【,】【我】【可】【不】【能】【分】【散】【他】【的】【学】【习】【精】【力】【啊】【。】【我】【终】【于】【意】【识】【到】【事】【态】【的】【严】【重】【性】【。】【看】【来】【只】【好】【让】【他】【慢】【慢】【理】【解】【其】【后】【果】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【几】【天】【,】【强】【总】【是】【在】【注】【意】【着】【我】【的】【一】【举】【一】【动】【。】【他】【的】【目】【光】【是】【那】【样】【的】【执】【著】【,】【闪】【烁】【着】【一】【种】【迷】【人】【的】【色】【彩】【。】【我】【想】【逃】【避】【,】【却】【总】【躲】【不】【过】【。】【我】【开】【始】【恨】【起】【了】【我】【的】【坐】【位】【,】【干】【吗】【要】【和】【强】【的】【坐】【位】【那】【么】【近】【。】【幸】【好】【明】【天】【就】【该】【调】【位】【了】【,】【但】【愿】【这】【样】【能】【够】【对】【他】【对】【我】【都】【有】【好】【处】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【0】【月】【1】【8】【日】【阴】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【以】【为】【今】【天】【要】【调】【座】【位】【,】【所】【以】【早】【晨】【去】【得】【很】【晚】【,】【因】【为】【我】【想】【逃】【避】【。】【可】【同】【学】【们】【似】【乎】【都】【学】【晕】【了】【头】【,】【没】【有】【一】【个】【人】【想】【起】【,】【只】【有】【我】【这】【个】【大】【傻】【瓜】【在】【自】【作】【多】【情】【。】【但】【总】【算】【在】【放】【学】【前】【实】【现】【了】【我】【的】【愿】【望】【,】【可】【是】【,】【距】【离】【并】【没】【有】【让】【强】【理】【解】【我】【的】【意】【思】【,】【他】【依】【然】【是】【那】【样】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【下】【午】【,】【强】【又】【写】【信】【给】【我】【了】【。】【这】【次】【我】【冷】【静】【下】【来】【,】【认】【真】【地】【想】【,】【最】【后】【决】【定】【找】【个】【机】【会】【和】【他】【谈】【谈】【,】【劝】【他】【好】【好】【学】【习】【,】【别】【胡】【思】【乱】【想】【。】【机】【会】【终】【于】【来】【了】【。】【下】【晚】【自】【习】【后】【,】【他】【截】【住】【我】【说】【有】【点】【事】【,】【我】【们】【来】【到】【操】【场】【上】【。】【淡】【淡】【的】【月】【光】【,】【他】【的】【心】【情】【很】【激】【动】【,】【我】【看】【得】【出】【。】【但】【我】【心】【里】【也】【忐】【忑】【不】【安】【。】【我】【还】【是】【第】【一】【次】【在】【夜】【晚】【单】【独】【和】【一】【个】【男】【孩】【外】【出】【交】【谈】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【强】【语】【无】【伦】【次】【地】【问】【我】【,】【我】【小】【心】【地】【回】【答】【着】【。】【我】【对】【他】【说】【:】【“】【你】【不】【觉】【得】【太】【早】【了】【点】【吗】【?】【我】【们】【的】【未】【来】【还】【是】【一】【个】【未】【知】【数】【,】【就】【像】【小】【船】【刚】【刚】【起】【航】【,】【还】【没】【有】【定】【向】【呢】【。】【再】【说】【,】【现】【在】【是】【什】【么】【时】【候】【?】【眼】【下】【最】【重】【要】【的】【是】【好】【好】【把】【握】【自】【己】【…】【…】【”】【真】【没】【想】【到】【我】【原】【来】【那】【么】【会】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【沉】【默】【了】【很】【久】【。】【强】【似】【乎】【理】【解】【了】【我】【的】【意】【思】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【说】【:】【“】【你】【说】【得】【对】【,】【我】【们】【不】【能】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【月】【2】【3】【日】【晴】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【几】【天】【,】【强】【变】【多】【了】【,】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【也】【慢】【慢】【地】【理】【解】【了】【他】【。】【期】【中】【考】【试】【,】【他】【又】【名】【列】【前】【茅】【,】【真】【为】【他】【高】【兴】【。】【不】【过】【,】【我】【也】【要】【再】【加】【把】【劲】【,】【超】【过】【他】【,】【我】【可】【不】【会】【服】【输】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【2】【月】【1】【0】【日】【 】【晴】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【天】【,】【强】【又】【给】【我】【写】【了】【一】【封】【信】【。】【不】【过】【,】【这】【次】【我】【可】【不】【必】【担】【心】【了】【。】【他】【在】【信】【中】【说】【,】【十】【分】【感】【谢】【我】【,】【使】【他】【慢】【慢】【地】【理】【解】【了】【同】【学】【之】【间】【的】【友】【情】【,】【渡】【过】【了】【难】【关】【。】【其】【实】【,】【谢】【什】【么】【呀】【,】【谢】【就】【得】【谢】【他】【,】【因】【为】【他】【让】【我】【也】【慢】【慢】【理】【解】【了】【什】【么】【是】【友】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【考】【场】【作】【文】【以】【日】【记】【形】【式】【来】【反】【映】【中】【学】【生】【最】【敏】【感】【的】【话】【题】【,】【将】【“】【我】【”】【如】【何】【处】【理】【男】【孩】【来】【信】【的】【办】【法】【告】【诉】【读】【者】【。】【文】【章】【运】【用】【心】【理】【描】【写】【手】【法】【很】【有】【特】【色】【。】【对】【强】【的】【来】【信】【,】【“】【我】【”】【从】【 】【“】【也】【没】【在】【意】【”】【到】【“】【真】【让】【人】【不】【理】【解】【”】【,】【从】【“】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【似】【乎】【也】【理】【解】【了】【他】【”】【到】【“】【慢】【慢】【理】【解】【了】【什】【么】【是】【友】【情】【”】【,】【这】【些】【对】【“】【我】【”】【的】【心】【理】【活】【动】【的】【描】【写】【,】【层】【层】【深】【入】【,】【揭】【示】【了】【“】【我】【”】【与】【“】【强】【”】【对】【敏】【感】【话】【题】【的】【理】【解】【是】【经】【过】【了】【近】【两】【个】【月】【的】【接】【触】【、】【了】【解】【后】【才】【有】【的】【,】【是】【一】【个】【“】【慢】【慢】【”】【的】【过】【程】【,】【从】【而】【凸】【显】【了】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【。】【作】【者】【处】【理】【这】【一】【敏】【感】【话】【题】【,】【谈】【不】【上】【什】【么】【经】【验】【,】【但】【还】【是】【值】【得】【大】【家】【借】【鉴】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【理】【解】【是】【个】【慢】【慢】【的】【过】【程】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【常】【州】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爸】【爸】【曾】【是】【一】【名】【军】【人】【,】【在】【我】【看】【来】【,】【他】【对】【我】【的】【感】【情】【就】【像】【他】【十】【几】【年】【军】【旅】【生】【涯】【中】【那】【一】【成】【不】【变】【的】【军】【装】【一】【样】【,】【单】【调】【而】【乏】【味】【,】【实】【在】【让】【人】【难】【以】【理】【解】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【爸】【爸】【的】【生】【日】【又】【快】【到】【了】【,】【从】【未】【给】【父】【亲】【庆】【祝】【过】【生】【日】【的】【我】【猛】【然】【觉】【得】【应】【该】【送】【爸】【爸】【一】【件】【礼】【物】【,】【这】【个】【心】【血】【来】【潮】【的】【决】【定】【不】【由】【得】【让】【我】【一】【阵】【窃】【喜】【,】【我】【坚】【信】【,】【它】【会】【拉】【近】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【之】【间】【的】【感】【情】【距】【离】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【于】【是】【,】【趁】【午】【休】【时】【间】【,】【我】【冲】【出】【了】【校】【门】【,】【来】【到】【一】【家】【花】【店】【。】【满】【屋】【浓】【艳】【的】【鲜】【花】【中】【,】【我】【一】【眼】【就】【选】【中】【了】【角】【落】【里】【那】【束】【默】【默】【开】【放】【的】【郁】【金】【香】【,】【乳】【白】【色】【的】【花】【瓣】【,】【淡】【淡】【的】【幽】【香】【。】【我】【精】【心】【挑】【选】【了】【几】【株】【,】【美】【美】【地】【想】【:】【“】【今】【天】【晚】【上】【送】【给】【爸】【爸】【,】【他】【一】【定】【会】【很】【高】【兴】【的】【!】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

              【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【5】【年】【的】【岁】【月】【有】【些】【坎】【坷】【,】【有】【些】【斑】【斓】【,】【又】【有】【些】【匆】【忙】【。】【蓦】【然】【回】【首】【,】【忽】【然】【发】【现】【青】【春】【的】【日】【子】【里】【,】【有】【些】【人】【、】【有】【些】【事】【,】【一】【直】【都】【在】【我】【的】【身】【旁】【,】【正】【是】【这】【些】【人】【、】【这】【些】【事】【,】【伴】【我】【走】【向】【成】【熟】【,】【走】【向】【辉】【煌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【远】【航】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【帆】【,】【没】【有】【桨】【,】【但】【年】【轻】【的】【我】【仍】【要】【起】【航】【,】【去】【追】【寻】【那】【个】【遥】【远】【的】【梦】【想】【。】【还】【记】【得】【那】【个】【午】【后】【,】【微】【风】【轻】【抚】【,】【天】【空】【晴】【朗】【,】【我】【背】【上】【行】【囊】【,】【沿】【着】【村】【口】【的】【小】【路】【,】【奔】【向】【远】【方】【。】【身】【后】【的】【村】【庄】【,】【这】【生】【我】【养】【我】【的】【地】【方】【,】【鸡】【鸣】【犬】【吠】【声】【已】【渐】【渐】【远】【去】【,】【村】【外】【的】【树】【林】【已】【悄】【悄】【地】【隐】【藏】【起】【母】【亲】【的】【泪】【光】【。】【我】【只】【能】【大】【步】【迈】【进】【,】【目】【视】【前】【方】【,】【因】【为】【我】【不】【想】【做】【玻】【璃】【缸】【里】【的】【小】【鱼】【,】【我】【要】【置】【身】【江】【河】【海】【洋】【,】【恣】【意】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【美】【丽】【新】【世】【界】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【终】【于】【来】【到】【了】【一】【个】【全】【新】【而】【美】【丽】【的】【地】【方】【,】【我】【看】【到】【了】【许】【多】【陌】【生】【的】【面】【孔】【,】【接】【触】【到】【许】【多】【陌】【生】【的】【目】【光】【。】【在】【这】【个】【充】【满】【刺】【激】【的】【新】【世】【界】【里】【,】【我】【怀】【着】【一】【腔】【豪】【情】【,】【幻】【想】【着】【经】【过】【奋】【斗】【,】【创】【造】【天】【堂】【。】【忽】【然】【想】【起】【故】【乡】【原】【野】【上】【狂】【妄】【自】【在】【的】【狼】【,】【想】【起】【它】【们】【犀】【利】【冷】【酷】【的】【目】【光】【。】【终】【于】【明】【白】【,】【其】【实】【,】【自】【己】【也】【是】【一】【匹】【出】【外】【闯】【荡】【的】【狼】【,】【不】【仅】【对】【周】【围】【的】【环】【境】【充】【满】【兴】【趣】【,】【充】【满】【渴】【望】【,】【还】【在】【不】【断】【地】【体】【验】【与】【尝】【试】【中】【,】【渐】【渐】【地】【学】【会】【了】【躲】【避】【危】【险】【,】【顽】【强】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【信】【任】【与】【支】【持】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【身】【在】【异】【乡】【,】【我】【时】【时】【事】【事】【渴】【望】【信】【任】【与】【支】【持】【的】【目】【光】【,】【同】【学】【好】【友】【的】【一】【声】【问】【候】【、】【一】【条】【短】【信】【,】【总】【能】【让】【我】【激】【动】【不】【已】【,】【老】【师】【的】【一】【次】【赞】【赏】【、】【一】【句】【鼓】【励】【,】【总】【能】【赐】【予】【我】【无】【穷】【的】【力】【量】【,】【最】【难】【得】【的】【是】【接】【到】【父】【母】【的】【电】【话】【,】【最】【刻】【骨】【铭】【心】【的】【是】【他】【们】【那】【句】【“】【儿】【子】【你】【真】【棒】【!】【”】【终】【于】【明】【白】【,】【人】【是】【最】【喜】【欢】【被】【关】【注】【、】【被】【关】【怀】【的】【动】【物】【,】【在】【被】【他】【人】【寄】【予】【期】【待】【时】【,】【我】【们】【总】【能】【生】【发】【出】【无】【尽】【的】【力】【量】【,】【从】【而】【更】【加】【努】【力】【地】【去】【编】【织】【自】【己】【的】【梦】【想】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【成】【长】【的】【规】【律】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【时】【的】【我】【,】【终】【于】【成】【长】【为】【他】【人】【眼】【中】【的】【“】【人】【才】【”】【抑】【或】【“】【成】【功】【人】【士】【”】【,】【坐】【在】【了】【考】【场】【上】【,】【而】【这】【一】【路】【上】【伴】【我】【走】【来】【的】【正】【是】【—】【—】【“】【远】【航】【”】【时】【广】【阔】【的】【发】【展】【空】【间】【、】【“】【美】【丽】【新】【世】【界】【”】【助】【长】【的】【求】【知】【欲】【望】【,】【以】【及】【每】【一】【位】【关】【心】【关】【注】【关】【怀】【我】【的】【人】【所】【给】【予】【我】【的】【信】【任】【、】【支】【持】【和】【赞】【赏】【。】【如】【果】【说】【人】【才】【成】【长】【有】【什】【么】【规】【律】【,】【我】【要】【说】【,】【是】【他】【们】【一】【直】【陪】【伴】【在】【我】【的】【身】【旁】【,】【助】【我】【走】【向】【成】【功】【,】【展】【翅】【翱】【翔】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【诚】【地】【感】【谢】【你】【们】【,】【一】【直】【陪】【伴】【在】【我】【的】【身】【旁】【。】【青】【春】【的】【岁】【月】【里】【,】【假】【若】【所】【有】【人】【都】【能】【有】【你】【们】【来】【伴】【随】【,】【那】【既】【是】【人】【生】【的】【一】【大】【幸】【事】【,】【又】【会】【避】【免】【许】【多】【的】【迷】【茫】【、】【迟】【疑】【、】【彷】【徨】【。】【真】【诚】【地】【祝】【愿】【每】【一】【个】【渴】【望】【成】【才】【的】【年】【轻】【人】【,】【继】【续】【寻】【找】【广】【阔】【的】【人】【生】【舞】【台】【,】【继】【续】【保】【持】【强】【烈】【的】【求】【知】【欲】【望】【,】【继】【续】【得】【到】【支】【持】【与】【信】【任】【,】【鼓】【励】【与】【赞】【赏】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【很】【有】【特】【色】【的】【作】【文】【,】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【以】【如】【下】【方】【面】【的】【亮】【点】【擦】【亮】【了】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【睛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【在】【内】【容】【上】【,】【作】【者】【从】【身】【边】【的】【小】【事】【写】【起】【,】【从】【自】【己】【的】【真】【实】【感】【受】【出】【发】【。】【文】【中】【写】【母】【亲】【送】【我】【的】【泪】【光】【、】【写】【我】【的】【尝】【试】【与】【成】【长】【,】【写】【同】【学】【父】【母】【的】【信】【任】【与】【支】【持】【等】【。】【这】【既】【从】【不】【同】【角】【度】【、】【不】【同】【侧】【面】【烘】【托】【了】【主】【题】【,】【彰】【显】【了】【一】【个】【乐】【观】【、】【向】【上】【的】【现】【代】【中】【学】【生】【形】【象】【,】【同】【时】【也】【使】【得】【文】【章】【显】【得】【生】【活】【意】【蕴】【浓】【厚】【,】【读】【来】【引】【起】【人】【们】【强】【烈】【的】【共】【鸣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【在】【表】【达】【上】【,】【文】【章】【的】【主】【要】【特】【点】【是】【语】【言】【质】【朴】【、】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【因】【而】【引】【起】【我】【们】【强】【烈】【的】【共】【鸣】【。】【通】【篇】【文】【章】【没】【有】【华】【丽】【的】【形】【容】【词】【和】【修】【饰】【语】【,】【也】【没】【有】【口】【号】【式】【的】【呼】【喊】【,】【有】【的】【只】【是】【作】【者】【娓】【娓】【的】【叙】【事】【,】【细】【细】【地】【抒】【写】【内】【心】【的】【真】【实】【感】【受】【,】【如】【“】【真】【诚】【地】【感】【谢】【你】【们】【,】【一】【直】【陪】【伴】【在】【我】【的】【身】【旁】【”】【,】【但】【这】【样】【的】【语】【言】【却】【深】【深】【地】【触】【动】【了】【我】【们】【的】【心】【灵】【,】【这】【也】【许】【就】【是】【“】【天】【然】【去】【雕】【饰】【,】【浓】【情】【出】【淡】【语】【”】【的】【艺】【术】【魅】【力】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【发】【展】【等】【级】【上】【,】【感】【受】【真】【切】【、】【细】【腻】【,】【抒】【情】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【,】【语】【言】【优】【美】【、】【流】【畅】【,】【表】【达】【方】【式】【灵】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【 】【:】【应】【允】【兰】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】糖尿病最新治疗【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【进】【入】【盛】【夏】【,】【烈】【日】【当】【空】【,】【骄】【阳】【似】【火】【,】【天】【气】【闷】【热】【难】【当】【,】【没】【有】【一】【丝】【风】【,】【稠】【乎】【乎】【的】【空】【气】【好】【像】【凝】【住】【了】【,】【人】【们】【在】【心】【底】【渴】【望】【着】【要】【是】【能】【下】【一】【场】【雨】【该】【多】【好】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【午】【后】【,】【太】【阳】【突】【然】【躲】【了】【起】【来】【,】【只】【见】【天】【空】【乌】【云】【密】【布】【,】【灰】【蒙】【蒙】【的】【,】【不】【禁】【让】【人】【想】【起】【“】【黑】【云】【压】【城】【城】【欲】【摧】【”】【的】【景】【象】【。】【云】【层】【不】【断】【地】【聚】【集】【下】【坠】【,】【天】【空】【一】【下】【子】【矮】【了】【许】【多】【,】【一】【场】【大】【雨】【即】【将】【降】【临】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【地】【沉】【静】【了】【下】【来】【,】【连】【喜】【好】【热】【闹】【的】【蝉】【也】【悄】【无】【声】【息】【,】【停】【止】【了】【歌】【唱】【。】【一】【会】【儿】【从】【遥】【远】【的】【地】【平】【线】【上】【划】【过】【一】【道】【道】【零】【碎】【短】【促】【的】【闪】【电】【,】【接】【着】【便】【听】【到】【了】【从】【远】【方】【传】【来】【的】【连】【续】【不】【断】【的】【嗡】【嗡】【的】【雷】【鸣】【,】【犹】【如】【从】【遥】【远】【的】【古】【战】【场】【传】【来】【的】【声】【声】【炮】【响】【。】【天】【越】【来】【越】【低】【,】【光】【线】【越】【来】【越】【暗】【,】【仿】【佛】【已】【临】【近】【夜】【晚】【。】【突】【然】【一】【道】【煞】【白】【的】【电】【光】【从】【天】【而】【降】【,】【像】【一】【条】【浑】【身】【带】【火】【的】【赤】【练】【蛇】【,】【飞】【过】【天】【际】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【乌】【黑】【的】【苍】【穹】【,】【把】【窗】【户】【映】【得】【透】【亮】【。】【紧】【跟】【其】【后】【,】【一】【个】【令】【人】【惊】【悚】【的】【大】【炸】【雷】【滚】【落】【窗】【前】【,】【天】【崩】【地】【裂】【般】【响】【彻】【大】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【顿】【时】【狂】【风】【大】【作】【,】【卷】【起】【地】【上】【的】【尘】【土】【,】【呼】【啸】【着】【迎】【面】【而】【来】【,】【摇】【撼】【着】【大】【树】【的】【枝】【杈】【,】【像】【惊】【涛】【骇】【浪】【拍】【打】【着】【岸】【边】【的】【礁】【石】【,】【发】【出】【声】【声】【巨】【响】【。】【豆】【大】【的】【雨】【点】【落】【在】【地】【上】【留】【下】【斑】【斑】【印】【迹】【,】【一】【阵】【湿】【润】【的】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【雨】【便】【掠】【过】【远】【处】【的】【树】【林】【梢】【,】【刷】【拉】【拉】【刷】【拉】【拉】【,】【由】【远】【而】【近】【地】【横】【扫】【过】【来】【。】【打】【在】【树】【叶】【上】【,】【像】【珍】【珠】【乱】【洒】【;】【打】【在】【水】【泥】【地】【上】【,】【仿】【佛】【骤】【然】【间】【叩】【响】【大】【地】【的】【琴】【键】【;】【打】【在】【水】【面】【上】【,】【宛】【如】【刹】【那】【间】【绽】【开】【的】【满】【池】【睡】【莲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【乡】【村】【的】【院】【坝】【,】【一】【群】【农】【人】【正】【挥】【舞】【着】【扫】【帚】【和】【铁】【锹】【,】【忙】【乱】【地】【抢】【收】【着】【坝】【子】【里】【晒】【着】【的】【粮】【食】【。】【正】【在】【午】【休】【的】【老】【人】【和】【小】【孩】【也】【赶】【紧】【从】【床】【上】【爬】【起】【来】【,】【跑】【到】【院】【坝】【帮】【着】【往】【屋】【内】【搬】【运】【。】【这】【家】【的】【收】【完】【,】【又】【投】【入】【到】【另】【一】【家】【,】【他】【们】【浑】【身】【的】【衣】【服】【都】【湿】【透】【了】【,】【分】【不】【清】【是】【雨】【水】【还】【是】【汗】【水】【,】【但】【他】【们】【依】【旧】【挥】【舞】【着】【,】【忙】【碌】【着】【,】【直】【到】【收】【完】【院】【坝】【里】【所】【有】【的】【粮】【食】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【雨】【越】【来】【越】【大】【,】【宛】【若】【断】【线】【的】【珍】【珠】【在】【屋】【檐】【下】【形】【成】【了】【一】【道】【道】【银】【色】【的】【水】【帘】【。】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【空】【气】【中】【就】【形】【成】【了】【一】【层】【迷】【蒙】【的】【雨】【雾】【,】【远】【处】【的】【群】【山】【连】【绵】【起】【伏】【,】【若】【隐】【若】【现】【,】【更】【增】【添】【了】【几】【分】【朦】【胧】【的】【美】【感】【。】【近】【处】【树】【木】【葱】【茏】【挺】【拔】【,】【神】【采】【奕】【奕】【,】【精】【神】【抖】【擞】【,】【宛】【若】【困】【倦】【的】【人】【们】【小】【憩】【了】【一】【刻】【,】【醒】【来】【后】【喝】【了】【杯】【冰】【茶】【,】【顿】【觉】【神】【清】【气】【爽】【,】【容】【光】【焕】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【渐】【渐】【地】【雨】【由】【密】【而】【疏】【,】【由】【大】【而】【细】【,】【由】【响】【而】【轻】【,】【最】【后】【止】【住】【了】【脚】【步】【。】【夏】【天】【的】【雨】【就】【是】【这】【样】【,】【来】【也】【匆】【匆】【,】【去】【也】【匆】【匆】【。】【它】【不】【像】【春】【雨】【那】【般】【温】【柔】【缠】【绵】【,】【秋】【雨】【那】【般】【慢】【条】【斯】【理】【,】【它】【显】【得】【热】【热】【烈】【烈】【,】【爽】【爽】【快】【快】【。】【雨】【过】【天】【晴】【,】【天】【空】【一】【碧】【如】【洗】【,】【澄】【明】【洁】【净】【,】【高】【远】【深】【邃】【。】【时】【而】【还】【有】【晶】【莹】【剔】【透】【的】【水】【珠】【顺】【着】【屋】【檐】【滑】【落】【于】【地】【,】【发】【出】【滴】【答】【的】【脆】【响】【,】【如】【仙】【家】【抚】【琴】【而】【奏】【,】【曼】【妙】【动】【听】【,】【声】【声】【悦】【耳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【雨】【将】【所】【有】【的】【燥】【热】【郁】【闷】【一】【扫】【而】【光】【,】【将】【一】【切】【懈】【怠】【迟】【滞】【统】【统】【赶】【走】【,】【让】【人】【感】【到】【心】【旷】【神】【怡】【,】【胸】【臆】【酣】【畅】【。】【我】【陶】【醉】【在】【这】【片】【乡】【村】【景】【致】【之】【中】【,】【享】【受】【着】【夏】【雨】【带】【来】【的】【清】【凉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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              【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【老】【人】【的】【脚】【步】【真】【的】【不】【老】【迈】【,】【转】【眼】【间】【它】【就】【将】【我】【推】【到】【了】【毕】【业】【的】【边】【缘】【,】【令】【我】【有】【些】【茫】【然】【,】【因】【为】【我】【还】【没】【有】【来】【得】【及】【准】【备】【。】【不】【管】【我】【怎】【样】【想】【,】【可】【它】【依】【然】【是】【我】【行】【我】【素】【,】【并】【不】【会】【由】【于】【同】【情】【我】【或】【者】【是】【可】【怜】【我】【而】【为】【我】【作】【短】【暂】【的】【停】【留】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【段】【时】【间】【之】【后】【,】【我】【逐】【渐】【开】【始】【适】【应】【这】【突】【如】【其】【来】【的】【一】【切】【了】【,】【因】【为】【我】【知】【道】【,】【一】【味】【地】【抱】【怨】【并】【不】【能】【解】【决】【问】【题】【,】【相】【反】【还】【使】【得】【自】【己】【离】【大】【部】【队】【越】【来】【越】【远】【。】【还】【是】【识】【时】【务】【者】【为】【俊】【杰】【,】【没】【有】【选】【择】【的】【空】【间】【和】【时】【间】【,】【初】【三】【我】【为】【你】【而】【痴】【狂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【办】【法】【,】【曾】【经】【太】【多】【的】【罗】【曼】【蒂】【克】【的】【梦】【幻】【在】【今】【天】【不】【得】【不】【被】【现】【实】【的】【大】【厦】【所】【击】【毁】【,】【来】【自】【父】【母】【的】【期】【望】【,】【来】【自】【老】【师】【的】【叮】【嘱】【,】【来】【自】【一】【切】【的】【一】【切】【已】【经】【让】【我】【们】【不】【敢】【再】【有】【太】【多】【的】【选】【择】【。】【那】【些】【含】【苞】【待】【放】【的】【红】【色】【玫】【瑰】【没】【办】【法】【就】【这】【样】【夭】【折】【了】【,】【充】【斥】【在】【我】【们】【心】【间】【的】【是】【那】【些】【记】【不】【完】【的】【单】【词】【和】【背】【不】【完】【的】【诗】【篇】【。】【也】【许】【,】【我】【们】【还】【难】【以】【接】【受】【,】【但】【是】【此】【刻】【的】【我】【们】【都】【清】【楚】【自】【己】【的】【使】【命】【是】【什】【么】【,】【于】【是】【我】【们】【就】【把】【它】【当】【做】【生】【命】【中】【的】【一】【个】【小】【插】【曲】【,】【待】【我】【们】【实】【现】【梦】【想】【的】【那】【一】【天】【再】【去】【回】【忆】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【向】【被】【视】【为】【体】【育】【天】【才】【的】【我】【不】【得】【不】【与】【我】【心】【爱】【的】【篮】【球】【断】【绝】【来】【往】【,】【看】【着】【它】【被】【尘】【封】【在】【班】【级】【的】【角】【落】【里】【,】【我】【的】【心】【里】【有】【一】【种】【说】【不】【出】【的】【滋】【味】【。】【一】【段】【时】【间】【没】【摸】【篮】【球】【的】【手】【总】【感】【觉】【很】【痒】【痒】【,】【于】【是】【自】【习】【的】【间】【隙】【,】【我】【们】【便】【在】【班】【级】【里】【很】【虚】【幻】【地】【做】【着】【一】【个】【个】【投】【篮】【动】【作】【,】【老】【师】【看】【到】【了】【也】【直】【摇】【头】【。】【不】【停】【地】【批】【评】【我】【们】【是】【“】【走】【火】【入】【魔】【”】【,】【可】【是】【我】【们】【也】【不】【生】【气】【,】【谁】【让】【我】【们】【这】【么】【爱】【好】【体】【育】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【着】【初】【一】【、】【初】【二】【的】【小】【弟】【弟】【和】【小】【妹】【妹】【们】【放】【假】【时】【那】【高】【兴】【的】【样】【子】【真】【的】【有】【些】【让】【人】【眼】【馋】【。】【想】【当】【年】【我】【也】【是】【这】【样】【被】【人】【羡】【慕】【的】【啊】【,】【可】【是】【如】【今】【我】【已】【经】【是】【初】【三】【的】【学】【生】【了】【,】【我】【只】【能】【羡】【慕】【别】【人】【了】【,】【那】【些】【轻】【松】【与】【快】【乐】【已】【离】【我】【远】【去】【。】【告】【别】【了】【,】【那】【些】【曾】【经】【给】【我】【带】【来】【快】【乐】【的】【假】【日】【,】【正】【是】【由】【于】【有】【了】【你】【们】【,】【我】【的】【初】【中】【生】【活】【才】【会】【充】【满】【了】【色】【彩】【。】【如】【今】【,】【坐】【在】【教】【室】【里】【,】【任】【凭】【思】【绪】【在】【记】【忆】【与】【现】【实】【中】【穿】【梭】【,】【而】【我】【的】【身】【体】【却】【始】【终】【被】【扣】【留】【在】【安】【静】【的】【角】【落】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【了】【欢】【声】【笑】【语】【,】【有】【的】【只】【是】【刷】【刷】【的】【写】【字】【声】【;】【没】【有】【了】【花】【前】【月】【下】【,】【有】【的】【只】【是】【挑】【灯】【夜】【读】【;】【没】【有】【了】【球】【场】【的】【英】【姿】【,】【有】【的】【只】【是】【虔】【诚】【的】【期】【盼】【。】【没】【有】【了】【一】【切】【一】【切】【,】【可】【是】【我】【们】【却】【拥】【有】【了】【更】【多】【。】【不】【是】【吗】【,】【看】【看】【那】【每】【次】【月】【考】【的】【成】【绩】【,】【前】【几】【名】【总】【有】【我】【们】【的】【身】【影】【。】【此】【时】【此】【刻】【,】【我】【们】【并】【不】【会】【去】【怪】【谁】【,】【尽】【管】【老】【师】【很】【严】【厉】【,】【但】【是】【我】【们】【知】【道】【他】【是】【为】【我】【们】【好】【。】【尽】【管】【我】【们】【曾】【经】【背】【地】【里】【说】【过】【他】【的】【坏】【话】【,】【可】【是】【都】【被】【老】【师】【当】【做】【蛛】【丝】【一】【样】【轻】【轻】【地】【抹】【掉】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【又】【懂】【得】【了】【什】【么】【才】【是】【真】【爱】【,】【如】【果】【我】【们】【能】【够】【对】【老】【师】【说】【上】【一】【句】【理】【解】【的】【话】【语】【,】【那】【么】【对】【老】【师】【来】【说】【一】【定】【会】【是】【最】【大】【的】【欣】【慰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【见】【了】【,】【我】【所】【钟】【爱】【的】【一】【切】【,】【为】【了】【我】【的】【理】【想】【请】【允】【许】【我】【与】【你】【们】【说】【再】【见】【,】【因】【为】【不】【久】【的】【明】【天】【,】【我】【将】【与】【你】【们】【相】【逢】【在】【另】【一】【片】【天】【地】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【刘】【卫】【杰】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】糖尿病最新治疗【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【读】【过】【一】【篇】【文】【言】【文】【,】【是】【说】【姓】【王】【的】【书】【生】【能】【将】【老】【师】【说】【的】【全】【部】【东】【西】【都】【记】【下】【来】【,】【这】【并】【不】【是】【善】【学】【。】【姓】【李】【的】【书】【生】【就】【说】【:】【“】【学】【习】【的】【大】【忌】【就】【是】【满】【足】【,】【而】【善】【学】【者】【贵】【善】【思】【!】【”】【所】【以】【说】【,】【学】【习】【是】【充】【满】【智】【慧】【而】【不】【是】【呆】【板】【的】【,】【善】【学】【者】【用】【脑】【子】【来】【学】【习】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【习】【需】【要】【智】【慧】【,】【智】【慧】【是】【留】【心】【观】【察】【事】【物】【,】【体】【验】【大】【自】【然】【。】【法】【国】【昆】【虫】【学】【家】【法】【布】【尔】【因】【《】【昆】【虫】【记】【》】【而】【著】【称】【于】【世】【,】【被】【罗】【曼】【·】【罗】【兰】【称】【为】【“】【掌】【握】【田】【野】【无】【数】【小】【虫】【子】【秘】【密】【的】【语】【言】【大】【师】【”】【,】【他】【笔】【下】【的】【昆】【虫】【形】【象】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【,】【精】【灵】【可】【爱】【,】【读】【者】【甚】【至】【能】【从】【文】【字】【间】【看】【到】【它】【们】【的】【喜】【怒】【哀】【乐】【、】【爱】【恨】【情】【仇】【。】【而】【法】【布】【尔】【能】【够】【获】【得】【如】【此】【大】【的】【成】【就】【,】【因】【为】【他】【学】【习】【得】【很】【聪】【明】【,】【他】【并】【不】【是】【一】【味】【地】【记】【录】【昆】【虫】【们】【的】【特】【性】【,】【他】【是】【在】【留】【心】【观】【察】【昆】【虫】【们】【的】【生】【活】【,】【真】【心】【体】【验】【大】【自】【然】【,】【所】【以】【说】【法】【布】【尔】【在】【体】【验】【中】【学】【习】【,】【他】【的】【学】【习】【是】【充】【满】【智】【慧】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【习】【的】【智】【慧】【也】【来】【自】【于】【学】【思】【结】【合】【。】【《】【事】【事】【关】【心】【》】【中】【说】【既】【要】【努】【力】【读】【书】【,】【又】【要】【关】【心】【政】【治】【,】【不】【是】【也】【让】【我】【们】【读】【书】【时】【关】【心】【留】【意】【一】【下】【外】【界】【的】【事】【情】【吗】【?】【这】【样】【,】【视】【野】【也】【就】【宽】【了】【起】【来】【,】【学】【的】【知】【识】【就】【会】【多】【起】【来】【。】【孔】【子】【曾】【经】【说】【:】【“】【学】【而】【不】【思】【则】【罔】【,】【思】【而】【不】【学】【则】【殆】【”】【,】【强】【调】【了】【学】【习】【与】【思】【考】【相】【结】【合】【的】【重】【要】【性】【。】【是】【啊】【,】【古】【今】【中】【外】【,】【凭】【着】【学】【思】【结】【合】【的】【智】【慧】【走】【向】【成】【功】【的】【人】【还】【少】【吗】【?】【木】【工】【鼻】【祖】【—】【—】【鲁】【班】【,】【在】【路】【上】【行】【走】【被】【草】【割】【破】【了】【腿】【,】【他】【仔】【细】【观】【察】【草】【叶】【上】【的】【锯】【齿】【,】【发】【明】【了】【锯】【;】【达】【尔】【文】【,】【能】【够】【在】【读】【书】【的】【时】【候】【思】【考】【,】【终】【于】【在】【书】【本】【的】【基】【础】【上】【,】【发】【现】【了】【生】【物】【界】【的】【自】【然】【规】【律】【—】【—】【进】【化】【论】【。】【可】【见】【,】【这】【些】【人】【确】【为】【智】【者】【,】【因】【为】【他】【们】【懂】【得】【学】【思】【结】【合】【的】【智】【慧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【将】【学】【习】【的】【知】【识】【实】【践】【出】【来】【,】【也】【是】【学】【习】【中】【的】【智】【慧】【。】【学】【习】【和】【实】【践】【是】【一】【对】【好】【朋】【友】【,】【合】【在】【一】【起】【就】【能】【力】【量】【无】【穷】【,】【若】【将】【二】【者】【割】【裂】【开】【来】【,】【便】【会】【两】【败】【俱】【伤】【无】【功】【而】【返】【。】【袁】【隆】【平】【的】【杂】【交】【水】【稻】【,】【就】【是】【袁】【老】【学】【习】【和】【实】【践】【的】【结】【晶】【;】【王】【选】【发】【明】【了】【激】【光】【打】【印】【,】【它】【是】【在】【王】【选】【上】【百】【、】【上】【千】【、】【甚】【至】【上】【万】【次】【的】【实】【践】【中】【,】【才】【一】【步】【步】【趋】【于】【成】【熟】【的】【…】【…】【我】【们】【的】【学】【习】【也】【是】【一】【样】【,】【若】【能】【将】【所】【学】【知】【识】【拿】【到】【实】【践】【中】【进】【行】【验】【证】【,】【便】【可】【以】【将】【知】【识】【本】【身】【更】【加】【深】【层】【的】【东】【西】【充】【分】【挖】【掘】【出】【来】【,】【并】【形】【成】【不】【可】【磨】【灭】【的】【印】【象】【,】【达】【到】【最】【佳】【的】【学】【习】【效】【果】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【无】【完】【人】【,】【学】【习】【总】【是】【必】【要】【的】【,】【有】【些】【人】【读】【书】【一】【事】【无】【成】【,】【有】【人】【却】【能】【榜】【上】【有】【名】【,】【因】【为】【善】【学】【者】【学】【习】【动】【脑】【子】【,】【学】【习】【是】【需】【要】【智】【慧】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【文】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【紧】【紧】【扣】【住】【试】【题】【材】【料】【中】【的】【“】【学】【习】【智】【慧】【”】【“】【学】【习】【方】【式】【”】【等】【关】【键】【词】【,】【提】【出】【了】【“】【学】【习】【需】【要】【智】【慧】【”】【的】【观】【点】【,】【并】【展】【开】【了】【有】【针】【对】【性】【的】【论】【述】【。】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【通】【过】【标】【题】【、】【论】【点】【和】【阐】【述】【过】【程】【得】【以】【明】【确】【和】【强】【化】【,】【作】【者】【有】【较】【强】【的】【扣】【题】【写】【作】【意】【识】【和】【能】【力】【。】【文】【章】【根】【据】【议】【论】【文】【的】【特】【点】【,】【按】【照】【“】【提】【出】【问】【题】【—】【分】【析】【问】【题】【—】【解】【决】【问】【题】【”】【的】【思】【路】【谋】【篇】【布】【局】【,】【写】【作】【思】【路】【比】【较】【清】【晰】【,】【文】【体】【特】【点】【比】【较】【鲜】【明】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【是】【,】【从】【整】【个】【论】【证】【思】【路】【和】【论】【述】【细】【节】【看】【,】【文】【章】【存】【在】【两】【个】【致】【命】【的】【缺】【陷】【:】【一】【是】【论】【证】【不】【力】【,】【论】【述】【过】【程】【中】【论】【据】【与】【观】【点】【之】【间】【缺】【乏】【切】【合】【点】【,】【造】【成】【论】【证】【盲】【目】【,】【力】【度】【不】【够】【;】【二】【是】【表】【达】【不】【畅】【,】【事】【例】【讲】【解】【不】【充】【分】【,】【词】【不】【达】【意】【现】【象】【时】【有】【发】【生】【,】【语】【言】【干】【瘪】【,】【缺】【乏】【表】【现】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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